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by Floris van Breugel

Gallery: LandscapePosted February 5, 20092,141 views36 comments
This is another from the archives.. from last year May, when I was still in a place where it rained (ie. Ithaca, NY). I came to this marsh about every day for a week, looking for the right composition and conditions (ie. fresh rain). As you can probably imagine, walking through this place was pretty rough... knee deep swamp water at times and loads of bugs! I think this image truly captures the place, but apparently I didn't realize that until I refound it last night (I'd chosen a busier image to process earlier). Let me know what you think!

Comments

36 comments
Comment posted by Benjamin Glatt on February 5, 2009 at 12:57 PM
This is just an explosion of awesomeness! :toast:
Registered on July 15, 2007, 171 Posts, 3566 Comments
Comment posted by Mel Ladewig on February 5, 2009 at 1:04 PM
Its great Floris. The little bit of grey/white sky at the top doesn't do much for the image, at least at this size, so I guess I'd try to tighten up just a tiny bit. But I love the sweeping arrangement of the focal points. They form a nice curve guiding the eye up and around the image.
Registered on July 24, 2005, 114 Posts, 1205 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on February 5, 2009 at 1:14 PM
I think this is extremely well done Floris! It may have been tough because of the bugs and uneven terrain, but it looks so beautiful. Must have been great to wander around there. The composition is very beautiful, like a secret fairy-tale garden. :toast:
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on February 5, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Mel - I thought about cropping out the sky, but I found it made the image too claustrophobic, and I don't find it distracting as is, I'm curious to see what others think.
Registered on December 19, 2008, 306 Posts, 4840 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Plant on February 5, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Beautiful Floris. Love the mix of pinks and greens, great use of complementary colors. Richly detailed and all the compositional elements of the scene work well together. The grey sky at top works in my opinion -- it completes the sweeping curve in the image and gives the eye a logical exit point, and repeats some of the lighter colors found in the fern fronds
Registered on July 7, 2008, 271 Posts, 1657 Comments
Comment posted by Scott Lawson on February 5, 2009 at 1:22 PM
The thing that stands out the most to me is the variety of plant life you've captured in this image. It looks like a wonderful place, doesn't make me think of wading around in swamp water surrounded by bugs. Looks much more relaxing than that.
Registered on March 3, 2008, 29 Posts, 337 Comments
Comment posted by Verena & Georg Pop on February 5, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Nature's beauty! Like a garden setting - just better.
georg
Registered on July 5, 2006, 272 Posts, 2823 Comments
Comment posted by Arnab Banerjee on February 5, 2009 at 1:40 PM
Very interesting image - the busy scene is very well composed. Great color and ideal lighting too
Registered on January 3, 2007, 313 Posts, 2270 Comments
Comment posted by Giovanni Russello on February 5, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Good job in getting this neat shot out of this "mess". :smile: The way you captured this makes it looks so calm and relaxing. I'm with you for the sky: it gives a "way out" to the viewer. Also the distortion works well: those tree trunks on the left bending away kind of emphasize the way out to the sky. Well done with the colours as well: the greens pop out of the monitor but look still natural to me.

Great stuff! :toast:

gio
Registered on January 21, 2007, 95 Posts, 1617 Comments
Comment posted by Gabi Lach on February 5, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Very beautiful, Floris. Great placement of elements in the frame. It looks lovely.
Registered on May 1, 2007, 101 Posts, 3187 Comments
Comment posted by Laurent Baig on February 5, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Wow, this is really amazing in terms of biodiversity.
Registered on January 12, 2005, 206 Posts, 6784 Comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on February 5, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Oh, Sweet! WOW! This has to be around Sapsucker Woods. One of my fondest childhood hang-outs. Used to go there with my father on various ornithology outings (both my parents and sister went to Cornell, and my mother's family comes from Ithaca). I've never seen any picture that really does it justice until now. I can look at this and feel the eastern humidity, and perhaps hear a roll of thunder in the background on a warm, damp afternoon. I'd gladly trade you for a print of this, especially if it's from Sapsucker. .
Registered on September 17, 2005, 780 Posts, 8091 Comments
Comment posted by Aaron Ellingsen on February 5, 2009 at 3:54 PM
This is very intriguing, Floris. All of the varied vegetation is a feast for the ol' eyeballs. Like a few others have mentioned I get a feeling of spring freshness, rather than brambles and bugs. My only gripe is the distortion caused by the downward camera angle. It's not a huge issue, but kind of a pet peeve of mine. I don't mind the sky though. It feels just right to me.
Registered on January 16, 2008, 56 Posts, 953 Comments
Comment posted by Andrey Antov on February 5, 2009 at 3:58 PM
Wow, that must be in paradise. How did you find this spot?
Registered on March 18, 2008, 292 Posts, 341 Comments
Comment posted by Christopher Jordan on February 5, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Floris - having wondered many areas like this myself (happily), I have to say this is one of the best images of this type I've seen. Really well done....and keep the sky please!

CJ
Registered on November 1, 2003, 62 Posts, 475 Comments
Comment posted by Dorin Bofan on February 5, 2009 at 4:17 PM
What a display of lush and beautiful vegetation! Everything is perfect here. Great work!
Registered on April 30, 2007, 122 Posts, 3086 Comments
Comment posted by Mel Ladewig on February 5, 2009 at 4:29 PM
I see what you mean about it drawing the eye out. It does do that. Without the bit of white, my eye goes from the lower fern to the flowering shrub and then back down the left shore of the water making an oval and there really isn't any escape.

With the sky in place my view sweeps up the right shore and out at the top and it the left shore is less prominent.

Registered on July 24, 2005, 114 Posts, 1205 Comments
Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on February 5, 2009 at 4:31 PM
Thanks everyone, glad to hear it's working!

Andrey - Marc was right, this is Sapsucker woods.. I went birding there almost everyday the last two years, and as soon as the fern fiddles were out and the azaleas were budding I spent a solid afternoon exploring this place for a suitable landscape. (When birding I was on the boardwalk.. this was out in the middle of the swamp!) While it looks like paradise, it's really hard to move through! After finding this spot, it still took me another couple tries before I found the right composition. Then I came back as soon as it sprinkled some rain.. without the rain the colors just don't even compare.
Registered on December 19, 2008, 306 Posts, 4840 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on February 5, 2009 at 5:05 PM
Floris,

This is beautiful! I'm amazed at how so many different elements can come together so nicely and make for such a concise, yet such a comfortable view. I can understand both views on the small patch of sky at the top, but personally I think it's better uncropped.

Fantastic color and great composition.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on February 5, 2009 at 5:08 PM
Really fantastic. There is so much for the eye to wander around and explore the different shapes, colors and tones. Such a great example of order out of chaos.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Paulo A.Lopes on February 5, 2009 at 6:18 PM
:toast: :toast: :toast:

How i love this, my best image for a while! Congrats!
Paulo A.Lopes
Registered on October 14, 2008, 122 Posts, 836 Comments
Comment posted by Cliff Dodge on February 5, 2009 at 6:44 PM
Your patience paid off, very nicely composed and exposed.
Registered on March 25, 2006, 125 Posts, 507 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on February 5, 2009 at 7:22 PM
This is great. Wonderfully composed. Not easy to organize all those elements and make it work. Wonderful colors and lots of great detail.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Guy Tal on February 5, 2009 at 10:22 PM
Beautiful intimate landscape, Floris. The ferns in the foreground are especially interesting. I love it.

Guy
Registered on November 1, 2003, 566 Posts, 15507 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Pelton on February 5, 2009 at 10:31 PM
This is a masterpiece. Very good arrangement of incredible variety of plants and colors. All I can say is Wow. :toast:
Registered on November 25, 2003, 380 Posts, 4647 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on February 5, 2009 at 11:46 PM
Hard to believe this is such a harsh environment. It looks so lush and inviting. Almost like a planted terrerium.

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Luke Ormand on February 6, 2009 at 12:47 AM
As someone who has spent a lot of time in wetlands on Long Island, I can attest to their beauty, even though they're a real pain to navigate sometimes -- but I don't think i've ever come across a setting as beautiful as that. To have the skunk cabbage, ferns, sedges etc. all in one place like that WITH good lighting is quite impressive.
Registered on February 4, 2009, 1093 Posts, 7035 Comments
Comment posted by Julian Barkway on February 6, 2009 at 11:54 AM
A riot of colour, Floris, but somehow the image isn't quite working for me. The composition is rather busy, which can often work but you need a single strong element to tie it all together and it's this strong element that's lacking. A good idea but it doesn't quite exceed the sum of its parts for me.

It would seem I'm in the minority here, so feel free to ignore my comments. :wink:
Registered on January 18, 2007, 344 Posts, 1961 Comments
Comment posted by Ross Murphy on February 6, 2009 at 12:10 PM
This shot indeed captures the Marsh very well, well done, persistance paid dividends.
Ross
Registered on January 28, 2009, 16 Posts, 80 Comments
Comment posted by Edward Nunez on February 6, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Wow, this is an amazing display of nature coming together as a whole. Composition, colors, elements. Beautiful!
Registered on April 19, 2007, 65 Posts, 711 Comments
Comment posted by Jimmy Gekas on February 6, 2009 at 3:00 PM
Wonderful, Floris! The ferns in the foreground ready to unravel are sweet.
Registered on July 26, 2007, 244 Posts, 2807 Comments
Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on February 6, 2009 at 7:30 PM
Thanks everyone! I'm really glad I dug this one up :smile:

Julian - thanks for the honest opinion, yes, it's very busy.. that's the nature of the place. I would probably regard this composition as one of my best, simply because it was so incredibly difficult. For some, chaos like this doesn't work, I find it one of the most exhilarating challenges there is. The single strong element may be hard to pick out here, I would say it's the dark pond, without it the image doesn't work. Then the isolated fern leaf, and other bits of isolated plants take it from there - for me at least.
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Comment posted by Vance Gese on February 7, 2009 at 1:26 AM
Wonderful intimate image of a photographically challenging environment. Composition really sings. Worth all the bugs n mud. Super.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on February 7, 2009 at 1:13 PM
What a beautiful marsh. I love the color and perspective!
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on February 10, 2009 at 3:27 PM
Floris: Since this is such a fantastic Flora shot I just have to comment. Superb shot. Count me in with those advocating a small top crop. Congrats on the EP. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Benner on February 15, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Beautiful...makes me eager for spring.
Registered on December 8, 2003, 482 Posts, 1868 Comments