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Bird

by Pius Mahimbi

Gallery: AvianPosted December 15, 200988 views6 comments
Hello everybody, I have just joined NPN!

Nikon D40, Sigma 70-300mm, f/5.6, 1/640sec, ISO-200, No tripod
Date taken: 05/07/2009

Comments

6 comments
Comment posted by Ron Bielefeld on December 15, 2009 at 5:20 PM
Welcome to NPN Pius. Nice bird you captured. If I may suggest some things to make this image and your following images stronger. First, the image is a bit tight on the left side for my taste. The bird is looking that direction, so I would like to see a bit more room there. Also, I would try and avoid having out of focus (OOF) branches cutting through the subject. In this image, the one OOF branch is really prominent. Lastly, it is almost always best to have the bird's head in the light rather than the shadows. You did get a nice catchlight and that does help. Keep shooting, posting, and most of all commenting on others work. Commenting will help you the most to improve your own work. Cheers :smile:
Registered on December 6, 2008, 360 Posts, 7132 Comments
Comment posted by Mia McPherson on December 15, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Pius,

Can you tell us what species this bird is? It has a beautiful eye and I love that pinkish bill.

Welcome to NPN, Ron B. has already addreesed what I would have addressed but I wanted you to know I look forward to seeing more of your work. This is a great place to learn, to share and to grow as a photographer.
Registered on June 25, 2007, 491 Posts, 12566 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Saunders on December 15, 2009 at 7:44 PM
Welcome to NPN Pius. Issues have already been mentioned. Try to get an unobstructed shot next time and if at first you don't succeed, try again :wink:
Registered on February 6, 2008, 321 Posts, 3035 Comments
Comment posted by Raymond Klassen on December 15, 2009 at 8:30 PM
Hello Pius, and welcome to NPN! I have nothing to add to what others have said, but make sure you comment on others work and read other comments. Doing that has helped me a lot in the past year.
Registered on November 30, 2008, 114 Posts, 790 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Gulash on December 15, 2009 at 10:55 PM
Hi Pius. You were able to approach him quite closely so you obviously have some field skills that will help immensely in this genre of photography. Read the critiques, add your own and ask questions. Enjoy the voyage here at NPN and with your future avian photography.
Registered on January 28, 2005, 879 Posts, 12098 Comments
Comment posted by Pius Mahimbi on December 16, 2009 at 6:39 AM
I very much appreciate your comments; they are very informative. Utah, unfortunately I am not in a position to tell the ID of this bird at the moment. Many thanks
Registered on December 15, 2009, 2 Posts, 2 Comments