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Dragon Wannabe
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Dragon Wannabe

by Joan Cambray

Gallery: Weekly ChallengePosted February 24, 201031 views7 comments
Hi all. I just finished taking Richard's Nature 101 class, and this is my first posting. Any suggestions for improvement greatly appreciated!

This is a whiptail lizard taken at Joshua Tree National Park in Southern California.

Nikon D300
200mm
f/9
1/320
ISO 200

Thanks!
Joan

Comments

7 comments
Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on February 24, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Welcome to NPN! An excellent start for a first post!

It's hard to tell at this size, but the lizard appears a bit soft. This might just be a lack of sufficient sharpening to the resize. Also, if you have a little more canvas on the top and left, the subject wouldn't feel so crowded. Either a complete photo of the lizard or a crop just before the back legs would be good.

You've done an excellent job of separating the subject from a very similar background.
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Comment posted by Joan Cambray on February 24, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Thanks Phil!

I learned about sharpening in Richard's class, but I forget to do it - hope Richard doesn't read this!!! :eek:

I went back and sharpened and cropped as you suggested - I think it looks much better, although still a bit soft. I originally debated using a shot with the whole lizard, but its tail is about 1 and 1/2 times the length of its body (quite a dragon tale - groan), so the lizard's head became pretty small in this size of a post.

I really appreciate your comments, and I'm going to try and post an image with those changes - we'll see if I get that right!
Registered on October 31, 2009, 6 Posts, 47 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Duval on February 24, 2010 at 9:41 PM
Joan,

I think the real interesting thing you captured here is the color on this males belly, that's his display. Whiptails do have really long tails and they usually hold them out straight.

Paul
Registered on June 30, 2009, 508 Posts, 1907 Comments
Comment posted by Joan Cambray on February 25, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Paul. Good to know about the display color. It's what caught my eye in the first place, so it must work! Hmmm ... hope it's not a mating display or it might mean I'm attractive to lizards - my hubby would be so pleased. :biggrin:

This guy had his tail on the ground, and I didn't get very good separation so it just blends in. Other than it's impressive length, it looked pretty blah in my shot.
Registered on October 31, 2009, 6 Posts, 47 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on February 27, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Cool! Nice comp and colors. Head looks a bit OOF, manual focus might have helped or a smaller f.
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Comment posted by Joan Cambray on February 27, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Stan, yes, I completely agree about the focus on the head. From looking at the original, I think I inadvertently auto-focused on his foreleg; manually focusing would have been better. Re aperture, do you mean a smaller f/stop in number (say f/4) or smaller in terms of the opening (say f/11)? I'm guessing the former, but I'm having a lot of trouble with aperture, so I wanted to double check.

Thanks much!
Joan
Registered on October 31, 2009, 6 Posts, 47 Comments
Comment posted by Sally King on February 28, 2010 at 10:39 AM
I love the colors and he does look very dragon like.
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