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Red Tail pre-flight
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Red Tail pre-flight

by Jennifer Day

Gallery: AvianPosted March 17, 2010153 views9 comments
I was sitting in a nearby woodlot today and had a Red-Tailed Hawk land right in front of me. I took several photos but this is my favorite. Plus, it was my very first photo taken on full manual! Let me know what I can do to improve :)
Jennifer Day

Comments

9 comments
Comment posted by Robert Bunch on March 18, 2010 at 12:10 AM
Very nice. I really like the very unusual pose. It looks like the face might be just a little OOF but not enough to ruin the shot.I agree with Rich about using manual settings. I always use manual settings because I Ieaned photography in the days before cameras had auto exp, auto metering, auto flash etc.

















Registered on May 18, 2004, 124 Posts, 2503 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Gatlin on March 18, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Hi Jennifer, welcome to the forums. It's always helpful in critiquing if you post the techs of your shot. In this case you did a nice job capturing the moment of take-off, but it's hard to say if you needed more DOF or SS (or both) to have the bird sharper. Look forward to seeing more of your work.
Registered on March 21, 2009, 202 Posts, 4187 Comments
Comment posted by Mia McPherson on March 18, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Jennifer,

Welcome to NPN's Avian Critique Gallery, it is a great place to learn, to share techniques and to become better photographers.

This is an interesting take off pose but it appears that it wasn't quite in focus. Listing your techs with each post will help us to give you more thoughtful critiques of your images.

I do use auto focus, set my camera to aperture priority, shut off auto ISO to adjust that myself for each shot and use auto white balance. In ACR I can make adjustments to the WB during processing if needed.

Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Registered on June 25, 2007, 491 Posts, 12566 Comments
Comment posted by May Haga on March 18, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Now that is one great pose.
Well done.
May
Registered on February 22, 2007, 714 Posts, 8470 Comments
Comment posted by Jennifer Day on March 18, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Sorry about not including the exposure info. Here it is: Canon Eos 450D 300mm f/5.6 1/1000s ISO 400
I really enjoy the feedback from everyone. Thank you all so much. I have learned a lot already from reading the critiques on other photos.
Jen
Registered on March 8, 2010, 5 Posts, 14 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Bielefeld on March 18, 2010 at 6:12 PM
I agree with others on this one Jennifer. Welcome to NPN. I like the pose and the wonderful BG. I am not a big cloner, but if the two branches in the ULHCwas not there is would make the image more powerful IMO. Just a little more sharpness on the bird to make this really sing. Please do list your techs with your images. We could really help you get used to manual settings much quicker. Overall, nice shot and keep them coming. Nothing replaces getting out and shooting when it comes to improving your images.
Registered on December 6, 2008, 360 Posts, 7132 Comments
Comment posted by Nate Chappell on March 18, 2010 at 11:33 PM
This is a really dramatic pose you captured well here Jennifer. Is it cropped much? :toast:
Registered on February 1, 2006, 1158 Posts, 19528 Comments
Comment posted by Jim DeWitt on March 19, 2010 at 12:34 AM
Welcome to NPN, Jennifer. Except for being very slightly soft, an excellent first Avian post. Except that suspect it isn't pre-flight but, ah... evacuation? Chalking? Choose your euphemism, but don't get under the bird. :wink:

I'm looking forward to your comments on others' posts. It's an excellent way to learn.
Registered on August 28, 2006, 1240 Posts, 8506 Comments
Comment posted by Jennifer Day on March 19, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Jim:
I didn't "scare" him away. ;) He landed about eight feet in front of me and spent almost ten minutes there. I took over fifty exposures. I was starting to think he was ill or injured somehow but then the female came soaring above calling and off he went. I have a nice picture of him preening that I will post later tonight. :)
Nate: I didn't crop it at all. I barely know how to use photoshop LOL That is my next thing to learn. :)
Again, thank you all for the feedback
Jen
Registered on March 8, 2010, 5 Posts, 14 Comments