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For the f/16 group

by Morris McClung

Gallery: LandscapePosted August 1, 2010516 views18 comments
My last post of this area utilized a shallow dof, which predictably, was not embraced by the majority of viewers here in ESS. We do tend to prefer f/16 on this forum. Or maybe shallow dof shots done better.

:biggrin:

Thanks for commenting on that one, and any comments and critiques on this one!

Morris

Comments

18 comments
Comment posted by Ant on August 1, 2010 at 5:28 PM
I like this one a lot, especially the type of light and the shining atmosphere... As a minor issue, I am distracted by the cut top of the tree on the upper center-right, but probably not much could be done...
Registered on April 13, 2009, 27 Posts, 474 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Baumbach on August 1, 2010 at 7:07 PM
I don't know, Morris. I think I liked the softer background better. This is very nice though. I'll be getting my film back on Tuesday. I hope my version came out.

- Dan.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 473 Posts, 7980 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on August 1, 2010 at 7:14 PM
This looks nice, but I think I like the softer version better too, Morris. The background looks to bright to me and the cut off tree takes away from it some also. I do think the foreground flowers are nice in this one and it looks very good to me until you get to the distant trees and sky.

Nick Bristol
lone Rock, Wi
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on August 1, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Didn't see the previous rendition but this is beautiful, Morris. The array of color and variety of the wildflowers is simply incredible. I might try and decrease the brightness of the background trees and sky, but other than that, this is really nice.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on August 1, 2010 at 8:32 PM
I hate be predictable, but I do like this one better. That is one heck of a field of alpine wildflowers. The sky is a bit blown out, unlike the first one??

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on August 1, 2010 at 9:47 PM
The DOF is perfect for me. It's quite a lovely array of blooms. The very bright sky is a significant issue and I would work on trying to blend in a better exposed sky if possible.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on August 1, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Thanks guys. I will work on the sky to balance the tones better.
Dan, I can't wait to see those scans of those large trannies!
Michael, I thought about calling this one just that, "the f64 club", but since I shot this with a dslr, I didn't want to offend you large format guys. :biggrin: F/16 seems to be the maximum around here due to the diffraction that is noticed by many above that.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Stuart Williams on August 2, 2010 at 5:18 AM
that's a glorious field of flowers. sky's an issue. i could, however, imagine a comp with just the flowers and perhaps some object (say, that rock) to root it. almost what one gets from the bottom half of this.
Registered on December 7, 2007, 247 Posts, 4792 Comments
Comment posted by Matt Anderson on August 2, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Both have their merits!
Personally, I like the DOF of the first. But, I would put the focal plane on this side of that rock roughly 1/3 in. Easy for me to nit pic now. In my experience, I think it leads the eye better. A soft entry, a soft exit, yummy goodness of details in the middle. Just my opinion.

Either way this is a grand shot. Nice work Morris.
Registered on September 6, 2007, 346 Posts, 2696 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Maile on August 2, 2010 at 7:57 AM
The colors, comp and variety in the FG are gorgeous. Unfortunately for me, the sky is just too much in this instance.
Registered on March 2, 2009, 984 Posts, 2518 Comments
Comment posted by Joseph Kayne on August 2, 2010 at 9:15 AM
:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 573 Posts, 2619 Comments
Comment posted by Gabi Lach on August 2, 2010 at 9:31 AM
I liked the last image with low DOF a little more. This one is still is very nice, the flower field looks beautifull!
Registered on May 1, 2007, 101 Posts, 3187 Comments
Comment posted by Mitch Moraski on August 2, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Morris,
I like the comp very much. I wish NE would offer such beauty. However the "bleached out" BG, seems a bit overdone. I also see this image as a bit on the cyan side. Perhaps a touch of white balance may help? Just a suggestion. :toast:
Registered on August 3, 2008, 105 Posts, 590 Comments
Comment posted by Kent Mearig on August 2, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Even at f/16 it appears that focus is not maintained through the photo, so perhaps this is a good compromise :wink: . On the other hand, maybe you'll have to figure out how to get your lens to f/64. Sharpness aside, I much prefer the arrangement of flowers in this photo when compared to the other.
Registered on September 4, 2006, 237 Posts, 4748 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Plant on August 2, 2010 at 3:22 PM
lovely mood and comp morris, a home run!
Registered on July 7, 2008, 271 Posts, 1657 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on August 2, 2010 at 6:55 PM
Hi Morris. I did not see the shallow DOF version, so I can't compare. I love the flowers, but the white sky is not really working for me. However, it does not seem to bother most of my fellow NPN'ers..
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Rick Goldwasser on August 3, 2010 at 9:32 AM
All I can say is that I agree with what others have said - absolutely amazing fg flowers but too bright at the top, looks like some pretty tough conditions. The bottom 2/3 is about as good as it gets for wildflowers, really nice!
Registered on May 10, 2009, 127 Posts, 970 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Duval on August 3, 2010 at 11:59 PM
I shoot f/22 allot, it's the smallest apeture on my Olympus E-500.ISO 100 for maximum color saturation. It does require a longer exposure, but sometimes the DOF is awesome every part of the image is in focus. This image seem to have a great disparity in tone range, so the sky seems blown out. This would be an outstanding image if the upper part brightness was balanced with the foreground Morris.

Paul
Registered on June 30, 2009, 508 Posts, 1907 Comments