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Adirondack Autumn
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Adirondack Autumn

by Donald Case

Gallery: LandscapePosted September 21, 2010369 views15 comments
Long time viewer / admirer of this site, first time posting a photo. I've been photographing the landscape a long time, but fairly new to digital, post processsing etc. Kind of anxious how my first try will look. This is from the top of Mt. Van Hovenberg in upstate NY, early October of last year. I was on this mountain the day after Ian Plant was up here....Nikon D80, 18-50 lens, grad filter

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15 comments
Comment posted by Anthony Vincent on September 21, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Welcome Donald :wavey:
You couldn't get a better group of folks to show your work to, honestly. The mood you captured via the light is great. Looks like some rain or clouds moving through the area.
Technically speaking I would say get a hold of Tony Kuyper's actions and learn the mechanics of them. Great tools for the digital tackle box. Im unsure on the sliver of rock but im not sure how much closer you could get but emphasizing the trees and scene in front of that is just magical. Great first post and thanks for sharing
Registered on February 5, 2009, 199 Posts, 2775 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Roane on September 21, 2010 at 7:22 PM
An excellent first post, Donald. Excellent colors and a nice mood to it. I wish the gray rock wasn't there - I'm big on foregrounds, but this one, I find, distracts from the awesome sky and awesome fall colors. I think you could get away with a crop off the bottom and left to get rid of it.
Registered on December 12, 2008, 213 Posts, 2226 Comments
Comment posted by dean hebert on September 21, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Love the colour in the valley.I might try to remove the rock in the FG.
Registered on August 4, 2010, 70 Posts, 1132 Comments
Comment posted by Michael J Greene, on September 21, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Hi Donald,

Welcome to NPN. Spectacular first post. I like it very much. I'll echo the others' sentiments about the rock, athough I don't mind it. The colors are fantastic and you did a wonderful job of handling the dynamic range of the scene. I look forward to seeing more images from you soon.

Michael
Registered on June 18, 2009, 86 Posts, 2317 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on September 21, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Donald,

Welcome to the ES&S Gallery! Looks like you joined a while ago and certainly glad you decided to finally post an image.

What a great autumn scene from the Adirondacks. I really like the combination of fall foliage with the storm/cloudy skys and rays of light hitting the landscape.

Not too much to critique really, but I would completely echo Anthony's recommendations about Tony Kuyper's masks, actions and Tutorials. And the one thing I think could be improved here is the contrast and shadows. This appears a little "hazy" - not necessarily from the atmosphere, but because I think you could drop the shadows a bit. The added contrast I think, would clear that up a little and even give this a little more pop.

As far as the rock in the FG, I'm a little indifferent. But it does border on being a "tweaner." And that basically means I either want to see a little more so we can enjoy the foreground element, or none at all. It's right in between more or none - hope that makes sense.

A little tweaking in PS and this will be quite wonderful.

Welcome! We look forward to your participation.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on September 21, 2010 at 10:14 PM
I really like this Donald. The light is really special . . . and difficult. I think you handled it well. The contrast between the warm and cool colors makes for a nice dynamism.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on September 21, 2010 at 10:26 PM
Excellent color and a very nice first post. I agree with the suggestions on crop and using Tony's masks to bring every nuance out of this. Well done.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on September 21, 2010 at 11:07 PM
Phenominal light and color Donald! Welcome to NPN. Excellent first post.

Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on September 22, 2010 at 12:51 AM
Welcome! And a fine first post you have here. The warm colors contrast nicely with the colder tones in the sky. A very well made landscape shot!
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Kevin Trinkner on September 22, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Welcome Donald.

Nice post, love all the colors and nice drama in the sky. the fg rock is a tad distracting, but probably nothing you could do about it. Spend some time on the site and you will get some great information on digital processing.

Have fun
Registered on June 30, 2008, 203 Posts, 2641 Comments
Comment posted by Christer Johansson on September 22, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Amazing autumn colors Donald. As a fist post You really set our expectations for your future postings. Maybe some more interesting foreground object would have improved the overall impression but its nice as it is.
Registered on October 10, 2009, 50 Posts, 191 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on September 22, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Hi Donald, welcome to ESS! I love the dacks, spent a couple years worth of weekends up there. Nice shot, some great drama in the clouds and nice color. I agree with the suggestions to tighten things up a bit, the fg rock and blue sky dont add to the drama here. Hope to see more from you! :wavey:
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Nicolas Belokurov on September 22, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Gorgeous autumn Donald. Welcome!
Registered on July 22, 2009, 41 Posts, 533 Comments
Comment posted by Walt Sterneman on September 22, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Wonderful shot Donald. I agree with the others that you could do without the rock. Welcome!
Registered on March 24, 2010, 73 Posts, 1268 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Lou on September 22, 2010 at 5:17 PM
Beautiful and vibrant colors with dramatic view. This reminds me of my teenager years in finger lake region.

Jim
Registered on August 3, 2010, 86 Posts, 273 Comments