The second of the series. I have tried to convey a scene where light and color are predominant and the lines are very soft. Comments appreciated.
Comments
15 comments
Comment posted by Carol Hyman on September 23, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Albert, I'm so glad to see you experimenting. This image has movement to it. Are you shooting out-of doors. I'm puzzled by the horizontal lines in the petals. And I'm puzzled too the yellow glow that appears to be spilling over. I'm also wondering whether you could crop the right 1/3rd of the image?
These are just questions I'm tossing out to think about. I don't have any answers.
More images, please.
Carol
Registered on January 18, 2007, 597 Posts, 8062 Comments
Comment posted by Bob Duff on September 23, 2010 at 8:17 PM
I like what you're doing here Albert. The colours are great. There is alot of negative space on the right side that I might consider cropping.
Registered on April 21, 2010, 160 Posts, 1675 Comments
Comment posted by Nathan Buck on September 23, 2010 at 10:03 PM
I love the lines and the colors Albert. I like this though I wish that left petal was not quite so dominant.
Nathan
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1101 Posts, 13589 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on September 23, 2010 at 10:44 PM
Albert,
I like the colors very much. I actually might prefer this with the focal plane pulled in closer to the viewer so that the petals are are even softer on the flower. I also think a crop to 5:4 from the right is worth considering but I'm not sure. I like the image as posted.
Pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by David W. Kelly on September 23, 2010 at 10:59 PM
I love the softness and the mood you are creating.
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Comment posted by Andrew Finlayson on September 23, 2010 at 11:57 PM
I quite like this one as it is. I love just the hint of sharpness on the petals, a really lovely shot.
Registered on July 29, 2010, 26 Posts, 404 Comments
Comment posted by Vincent Nobel on September 24, 2010 at 12:27 AM
Nice! Love the composition and overall soft flow of this image.
Registered on June 16, 2010, 57 Posts, 175 Comments
Comment posted by Brigitte Lorenz on September 24, 2010 at 10:07 AM
wonderful softness, Albert...
Brigitte
Registered on January 10, 2009, 187 Posts, 1507 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on September 24, 2010 at 12:22 PM
I quite like this, Albert. I always like Pinks with Yellows and there is enough detail in the frame for my eye to rest on.
You are doing some nice and different work. Kudos.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Giuseppe Guadagno on September 24, 2010 at 2:38 PM
An impressive image, Albert, due to the contrast of luminous yellow and dark violet.I too think that a 5:4 format can starken the structure of the composition. Anyway, I like it very much.
Cheers.
Registered on February 3, 2007, 827 Posts, 5052 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on September 24, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Oh, Albert! This is magnificent!
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Lowe on September 25, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Albert, I like this as presented, but I think a crop as suggested puts this over the top.
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Comment posted by Bill Fach on September 25, 2010 at 11:26 PM
Albert: Wonderful colors. I do think I would like a more definite POF but this does work for me as is. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on September 26, 2010 at 3:01 PM
This is lovely, Albert !! Everything works well here for me - just the right amount in focus and a title which encapsulates the mood of the image. Fine work !!!
Registered on May 18, 2007, 1108 Posts, 7647 Comments
Comment posted by Debashis Bandyopad on September 27, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Nice image Albert... Keep them coming
Registered on June 24, 2007, 130 Posts, 1309 Comments
Comments
15 commentsThese are just questions I'm tossing out to think about. I don't have any answers.
More images, please.
Carol
Nathan
I like the colors very much. I actually might prefer this with the focal plane pulled in closer to the viewer so that the petals are are even softer on the flower. I also think a crop to 5:4 from the right is worth considering but I'm not sure. I like the image as posted.
Pat
Brigitte
You are doing some nice and different work. Kudos.
Cheers.