In With Two Feet

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 16, 2010188 views13 comments

The title is a reference to the processing, rather than the actual photo. This is a different image than one I previously posted, a bit further back, a bit wider view. The main thing is I dove in and took a new approach to processing in Elements from all the help I've received here. Ditched the "Quick" fix approach and sliders, and adjusted levels, curves, color more manually.

Anyway, curious as to how close I've come to getting it "right", so all C&C of course is welcomed!! Larger suggested, thanks.

Comments

13 comments

Comment posted by Luke Ormand on December 16, 2010 at 3:20 PM

Bill, you've done an excellent jonb here. With increased processing abilities, your work can now shine for what it is.

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Comment posted by Adam Gibbs on December 16, 2010 at 3:43 PM

Pretty image, Bill. I don't think I commented on your last post but as far as the processing goes I think this is a vast improvement over your last image of the same falls. As far as the image itself goes it looks like a great location and I think you've done a wonderful job in capturing the falls and surrounding environs. I do think the falls holds a bit more interest for me on the right more than the left side.

Registered on November 1, 2003, 168 Posts, 870 Comments

Comment posted by dean hebert on December 16, 2010 at 5:58 PM

Your definitely putting your best foot forward

.Your processing looks more "natural" here than in previous posts. I don't like seeing such a strong element cut-off like the lower right side of the falls.I would try to include all the falls or just the most interesting section(s).

Registered on August 4, 2010, 70 Posts, 1132 Comments

Comment posted by Bill Maile on December 16, 2010 at 6:24 PM

It's just funny, I love posting next to Marc's incredible stuff.

Registered on March 2, 2009, 984 Posts, 2518 Comments

Comment posted by John Mumaw on December 16, 2010 at 7:37 PM

Way to go, Bill! Looks like you're on the 'road to recovery'.

The greys along the top of the falls look a bit odd, though. Still, this is worlds better than the last time I saw this (or a similar view).

Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments

Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on December 17, 2010 at 1:09 AM

Now this looks completely natural to me, and pretty darn nice! You have nice tones throughout, and the contrast looks pretty good too. One thing I see, are some overly hot spots in the white water. If you chose to, you could pass over those with the clone brush at a very low(15%) or so opacity. That could tone them down nicely.

Chris

Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments

Comment posted by Vlad Sadovsky on December 17, 2010 at 2:36 AM

Well done - i like the scene and the choize of the aspect ration. Water action is great. I miss a little bit of rocks on the right to space the water away from the frame..

Registered on November 12, 2010, 48 Posts, 358 Comments

Comment posted by Bill Maile on December 17, 2010 at 5:40 AM

thank you folks, especially Luke and John for the PSE tutoring. Luke, appreciate the kind words, and Chris you are also always encouraging--sometimes sarcastic, but me too!!

And in general, yes the comp does leave something to be desired on this as far as the RHS goes. Next time!! Off to brave 15 degree temps and frozen water, can't wait!

Registered on March 2, 2009, 984 Posts, 2518 Comments

Comment posted by Wade Hardy on December 17, 2010 at 10:15 AM

Looks great to me Bill. The image is very crisp and detailed. Nice work.

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Comment posted by Taylor Reed on December 17, 2010 at 10:40 AM

Lookin' good, Bill. Nice processing.

Registered on February 18, 2010, 26 Posts, 556 Comments

Comment posted by Neven Dries on December 17, 2010 at 10:49 AM

Very nice, Bill. Your new processing has paid off. I love the natural feel of this shot.

I hope we can get together to shoot sometime. I come up to your area a lot.

Registered on February 24, 2006, 52 Posts, 160 Comments

Comment posted by Michael J Greene, on December 17, 2010 at 7:52 PM

Bill,

I am liking this new style too Bill. Your web sharpening is way better! If you don't mind me asking, where in PA was this taken? It is a gorgeous stream/creek.....

Registered on June 18, 2009, 86 Posts, 2317 Comments

Comment posted by Bill Maile on December 17, 2010 at 10:28 PM

Michael, it's in the very northeastern section of PA, not far from Elk Mountain if you know the ski area. A good friend., was kind enough to tell me about this stream, and I stil haven't gotten to all the spots along it. It's a beauty for sure, and many more in the area. Thanks!

Registered on March 2, 2009, 984 Posts, 2518 Comments