Crystal River
by dean hebert
Happy New Year to everyone. Spent a quiet morning at the river hoping for some magic in the skies that never materialized.I was lying on the ice trying to set this shot up. I think I need one of those flip-up do-dads.
Xsi
10-22@10
0.3sec@f16
Iso 100
I'm thinking the mountain is too far away and that I should have zoomed in a bit.Comments?
Comments
11 commentsI like your near/far composition and clearly the ice formations are the central subject simply because that's what you're telling the viewer. The mountains and sky are more of a background accent element - at least for me. I like it when it's obvious how the photographer crafts an image telling the viewer what they want to them to look at. Hope that makes sense.
I am with Doug though a little bit on this. The patterns and texture of the foreground ice are wonderful, but once you get half way up the details are lost and there isn't much to connect the foreground with the background. A minor point for sure, but the middle part loses a little interest. Maybe not just a zoom, but rather than laying on the ice you could get more detail out of the more distant ice from a high vantage point and a longer focal length. But then that's all just speculation since I wasn't there.
All in all, this works very well showcasing the fascinating patterns in the ice and this is well captured.
Lon
( I had to go to your website to see where this might be.....no snow on the mountains?