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The Oval

by Jared Atencio

Gallery: LandscapePosted March 10, 2011675 views24 comments
I was fortunate enough to take a spontaneous trip to Death Valley a couple weeks ago, where I was finally able to visit the Racetrack in the DV backcountry. Although I had timed my trip to try and capitalize on a snowstorm, by the time I actually made it to this location, the system had moved East leaving clear skies behind. I had originally envisioned a different shot from here, but soon realized conditions were perfect for this type of night shot instead.

This location has become rather iconic and I HAVE seen star trail shots from here so nothing new there, but I wanted to use the slight crescent moon to illuminate the FG a bit more and try to bring more detail to the intricate patterns of the Playa (or Dry Lake Bed). Since I had lost most of my equipment to a close encounter with the Pacific Ocean (described in an earlier post),I had pretty slim pickings on this trip in terms of gear. I had no intervalometer to time out exposures, so used a piece of masking tape with my camera's Bulb setting to time out ~4 minute exposures. I was able to get about 18 exposures before the moon began to make the stars fade, but also lit up the playa where I made a longer 6-8 minute exposure that was moonlit and also had some very slight predawn glow. Usually I don't go for such a well lit FG, but I decided to use a little more artistic liberty in this case.

All thoughts and critiques are welcome in hopes of improving this image and my processing in general-thanks in advance!

Tech Notes:
Canon 5dmk2
Canon 17-40mm L
18 ~4minute exposures at ISO 100 f/4 focus determined beforehand a little off infinity
1 ~6-8 minute exposure at ISO 100 f/8 focus predetermined for FG rock
Blended in PS using Floris VB's algorithm to reduce gaps in trails (Thanks Floris!)


Comments

24 comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on March 10, 2011 at 4:21 PM
This is sensational Jared. I have never seen a star trail from the Racetrack before, so I'm loving this. I love the contrast between the cool night sky and the warmer, cracked ground too. Processing looks great as well.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Kory Lidstrom on March 10, 2011 at 5:10 PM
Very beautiful image, well made. I like it a lot. Reminds me of one of Floris' images.
Registered on November 19, 2008, 49 Posts, 1035 Comments
Comment posted by Art Escobado on March 10, 2011 at 5:30 PM
The last posting with the edited update and now this image...what kind of performance enhancing photo drugs are you on?!?! This is a strong image. :toast:
Registered on January 7, 2007, 0 Posts, 775 Comments
Comment posted by Gary McGhee on March 10, 2011 at 5:38 PM
This is a winner for me Jared, perfect placement of the rock and I always enjoy viewing star trail shots too.

Gary.
Registered on April 15, 2010, 142 Posts, 2416 Comments
Comment posted by Jack Brauer on March 10, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Awesome! The overall exposures look spot on, and the colors are very nice as well. This is an appropriately mysterious image for a mysterious place!
Registered on September 12, 2005, 40 Posts, 627 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Jones on March 10, 2011 at 6:19 PM
The racetrack looks sort of surreal on its own, so this treatment (bright FG for a night shot, and the star trails) fits it well! Excellent technique, especially considering your equipment limitation.
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments
Comment posted by John Mumaw on March 10, 2011 at 7:27 PM
I was hoping to see this here soon. Professional caliber work and 'development' here, Jared.
One of the best 'Racetrack' images I've seen!
Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Metternich on March 10, 2011 at 8:43 PM
This works very nicely Jared.

Mark
Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on March 10, 2011 at 9:08 PM
Terrific shot. The star trails are great and the natural lighting on the foreground take this over the top.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by James Fougère on March 10, 2011 at 9:36 PM
Well Done Jared :biggrin: This is great! I like how you used the partial phase of the moon to light up the foreground. I will be in this area and others in the SW in a few weeks! I cannot wait to try these sort of shots out.
Registered on October 25, 2010, 41 Posts, 831 Comments
Comment posted by Zack Clothier on March 10, 2011 at 9:52 PM
Nice, I like the deep blue sky. Not a big fan of startrail shots but I like this one very much. I could see darkening the playa just a bit to give it a little more mystery. :toast:
Registered on January 28, 2010, 343 Posts, 2257 Comments
Comment posted by Paul DeCesare on March 10, 2011 at 9:57 PM
Iconic Shmyconic, this is in the Top three of all shots I've seen of this spot! Extensive planning and processing totally paid off. That well-lit FG sells it. The comp is spot on, the tones of blue sky & reddish terra firma are a perfect pair. Well done! :toast:
Registered on August 31, 2007, 29 Posts, 202 Comments
Comment posted by Gino Cortez on March 10, 2011 at 10:13 PM
I love the way the disparate elements of the photo fit together..sky, foreground, color. The only thing missing for me, is the middle ground, which seems to be very soft...That aside,...great shot! :toast:
Registered on November 23, 2010, 57 Posts, 396 Comments
Comment posted by INGOMA on March 10, 2011 at 11:46 PM
Lovely star trails and I very much like the lit playa. I think the lit playa works very well with the star trails. The only thing that invokes a little bit of tension in me are the dark mountains - they form some what of a disconnect between the lit playa and the sky. On the other hand I don't know how this could be improved! Perhaps lighten the mountains ever so slightly or darken the playa a little bit more?

I any case, a wonderful image.

Regards,
Christoph
Registered on July 2, 2004, 231 Posts, 3110 Comments
Comment posted by Michael J Greene, on March 10, 2011 at 11:50 PM
Really fantastic image Jared. I appreciate you taking the time to explain the creative process behind it too. I think it looks incredible as is. Congrats,

Michael :wavey:
Registered on June 18, 2009, 86 Posts, 2317 Comments
Comment posted by Boris Pophristov on March 11, 2011 at 3:45 AM
As a star trails fan, I much appreciate this image. Very well done!
Registered on February 1, 2011, 15 Posts, 73 Comments
Comment posted by Rodrigo Sandoval on March 11, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Jared,
Wonderful shot. Truly amazing result and the details you describe it took you to get this result totally complete the idea. The composition and exposure are absolutelly perfect. :toast:
Registered on April 4, 2009, 13 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment posted by Jared Atencio on March 11, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Thank you for the comments and feedback everyone!

Gino-that was also a concern of mine. Due to my low aperture, both the immediate FG and the stars themselves are sharp, but the midground playa was not nearly as sharp as I would have liked. In a normal focus blend, I would do a separate exposure specifically for the midground but didn't have that luxury with the fleeting and changing light. I also used the Gradient tool in PS to help blend the two exposures which also blended the focus which I feel created some unwanted artifacts-I'll have to see how it appears in print and go from there.

Christoph-I agree that the mountains are pretty dark for my liking. I had another version where the mountains were a little lighter but the transition seemed a bit more abrupt, so I darkened them a bit for this presentation. I agree that I could go a tad lighter on them, so thanks for pointing that out!

Registered on June 23, 2009, 21 Posts, 422 Comments
Comment posted by Laurent Baig on March 11, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Dramatic!
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Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on March 11, 2011 at 10:28 PM
Just awesome.

aF
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Stefan Gimpl on March 12, 2011 at 11:32 AM
great startrails image Jared. I like the foreground illuminated by the moon. And the startrails look very clean without the gap in between. What is the VB algorithm?
Registered on May 12, 2007, 26 Posts, 184 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on March 12, 2011 at 6:55 PM
Super shot.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Vijay Raj on March 13, 2011 at 8:28 AM
This takes the star trails image making further with the rock and the line. Nice indeed. Would love to see a link to Floris algorithm.
Registered on November 22, 2010, 29 Posts, 100 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Dayton on March 14, 2011 at 8:26 PM
I love it, Jared! Great compositon with the boulder in the
correct FG location of the composition. The star trail is
a superb addition.
Registered on November 11, 2008, 281 Posts, 3958 Comments