Government Shutdown + repost
by Stan Rose
Why fret--just head up Rampart Range Road through a few inches of fresh snow and soak in the views of distant Cheyenne Mountain (inside the hollowed mountain lies NORAD...) from up high. Im hoping for at least one or two snowfalls to go, im not ready for Winter to end just yet...
5Dmkii; 17-40; 2img blens at f/20
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25 commentsI think you could crop about an inch from the left to lose that real bright patch of snow and more of the bright skies.
Peter
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
--P
wonderful indeed
Majestic blues I actually like the first version better. It's a wonderful snowscape I really like the touches of light on the scene.
I am going to be upfront and I talk about several technical issues I see with this image. First off, your blending could be improved. Take a look at the ridge line of trees on the left hand side of the image - there's a black line at the top. Second, you have a couple distracting elements on the right hand side of the frame. The tip of the tree running off the frame on the top is very distracting to me, plus it looks like it has some haloing around it. Also, the branches protruding in from the right hand side in the foreground are distracting as well.
I recommend a slight crop on the right and then clone out the additional branches in the foreground. (If you believe in that sort of thing, I know some folks won't do it). The blending speaks for itself and personally I like the original colors better. The cyan reduction gives the image a garish feeling - maybe something half way in the middle would be a good compromise. I also like the darkening of the sky on the left. Overall, it is a pretty shot - just not up to your usual standards of presentation on this forum.
Michael
I suppose it might help if i brought down the snow brightness a bit (??) but the dark values are identical from top to bottom.
Michael