Gallery: AvianPosted May 10, 201169 views4 comments
A Trumpeter Swan dries its wings at Wintergreen Lake in Southwest Michigan.
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Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on May 10, 2011 at 7:00 PM
Great action in this shot. You handled the exposure on the whites very well. IMO the head and beak seem soft. don't know if you could have increased your dof to remedy that. I like the front lighting and the pose is wonderful.
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on May 10, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Hi, Neil - you caught a nice pose here.
Good exposure on the tough whites against a dark BG.
I would have liked to see the whole bird and a bright eye - with a levels adjustment to the eye, you could likely bring out more detail.
Cheers!
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Gulash on May 10, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Hi Neil. I agree with the others that a full body view might be advisable, is this a crop? - providing more/some shooting data would help the critique process. Great timing catching this wing stretch/or whatever it is that makes them do this.
Registered on January 28, 2005, 879 Posts, 12098 Comments
Comment posted by Nate Chappell on May 12, 2011 at 10:01 AM
Welcome Neil! Providing your equipment and settings (F-stop, shutter speed, iso etc) will help us give you more complete critiques. Nice detail in the whites and a neat pose but I too would have liked to see more room at the bottom here to include the whole bird. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Registered on February 1, 2006, 1158 Posts, 19528 Comments
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4 commentsGood exposure on the tough whites against a dark BG.
I would have liked to see the whole bird and a bright eye - with a levels adjustment to the eye, you could likely bring out more detail.
Cheers!
Sandy