Big Island Twilight

Gallery: LandscapePosted June 14, 2011150 views4 comments

Hello,

This is just after sunset along the southern coast of the Big Island of Hawaii.

Any Comments or criticisms are always appreciated.

Thank you,

5D MK II, Canon 16-35 L.

Comments

4 comments

Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on June 14, 2011 at 9:32 PM

I like it, Shaun, although it seems a little tight on the sides to me. Nice lines in the comp, and pleasant conditions. Neat dynamic in the foreground, but it seems to be moving at first, and takes a moment to adjust to. Not sure why that is, but that was my initial sensation.

Chris

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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on June 14, 2011 at 10:25 PM

Beautiful comp and very nice light. It feels a bit overexposed on my monitor and darkening it some might enhance the colors in the scene.

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Comment posted by Jorne de Bruin on June 15, 2011 at 5:50 AM

Very nice scene Shaun, I especially like the compositon here. Agree that darkening it a little may help with the colours.

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Comment posted by Ron Pederson on June 15, 2011 at 8:10 AM

I like the composition and the way the rocks in the FG lead you back. Maybe the sky could use a little punch of color. It may be the linear aspect of the low clouds in the BG, but it seems to tilt ever so slightly to the left.

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