Fawn Lily w/ unknown bug
by Charlie Baugh
Olympus E-5
50mm F2 macro
1/250 sec @ F13
-0.3 EV ISO 200
Fill flash
spot metering
manual focus
approx 50% crop
Selective darkening of bugs antenae and legs
Large view provided
Thanks for comments and critiques
Comments
7 commentsI also think the abrupt edge of the cut-off petal is awkward, and the black border emphasizes it further. A softer border - white or pink perhaps - would not make the petal so glaring.
Sandy
Don't know what you're using for fill, but it over powers the image just a bit IMO.
On your pop-up flash: Try a small opaque plastic travel size lotion bottle, slit on one side. You just slide it over the flash head. I used it on my Olympus C8080 with good results.
Try to minimize your crop if you can also..The flower looks large enough that even with the 50mm you could've got closer?
Anyway, just my two cents..Hope it helps in some small way