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Lines and curves
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Lines and curves

by Gary Yeoh

Gallery: FloraPosted July 17, 2011190 views20 comments
A study of leading lines and curves with this calla from class.

D90 50mm F16 30 sec polarizer natural late afternoon light from window with reflector fill. Cs5, Viveza, TK masks. Thanks for looking and C&C appreciated. Have fallen behind on commenting but will catch up later.

Comments

20 comments
Comment posted by Barbara Graham on July 17, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Gary, beautiful lines and curves. I like dark a lot, but I think in this one I'd like to see just a little bit more light on the flower and the left-hand leaf.
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Comment posted by scott lanz on July 17, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Superb, Gary. Beautiful and artistic. :toast:
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Comment posted by Pat Sampson on July 17, 2011 at 1:03 PM
This is fascinating to me Gary. I love the calla and the leaf on the viewer's right. I think my reservation is the leaf on the viewer's left. For my tastes it might be narrower and I think I'd like more room between it and the Calla. As I look at it, I feel like it's trying to crowd its way into the image. I may certainly be wrong about this, though.

I love those curves and the space crated by the leaf on the viewer's right.

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Charlie Baugh on July 17, 2011 at 1:21 PM
I usually love your work, Gary and the flower here is quite nice but overall this seems unnatural. Did these leaves grow as shown? Knowing your professionism I feel, not comfortable, saying this and hope you will understand my comments as I intend them, which is honesty, not wanting to hurt.

Charlie
Registered on April 18, 2011, 329 Posts, 1985 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on July 17, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Gary: Marvelous element placement/arrangement and a fantastic final presentation. Superbly crafted image.>=))>
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Comment posted by Todd Bielby on July 17, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Great flower Gary. Very artistic shot. :toast:
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Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on July 17, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Very beautiful - the graceful lines and curves are great. I think I'd also like a bit brighter flower and left leaf.
And the little blips at the left leaf tip and near the left bottom could go... :wink:
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Brigitte Lorenz on July 17, 2011 at 4:00 PM
very artistic comp., Gary...would like to have a bit more light just at the flower

Brigitte
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Comment posted by Richard Teller on July 17, 2011 at 4:25 PM
I can't add anything to what has already been said. Great image.
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Comment posted by Robert Dayton on July 17, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Very artistic, Gary! I like the light variations.
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Comment posted by Albert Darmo on July 17, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Hi Gary :wavey: Awesome composition, with light and color that fascinates the senses. :toast:
Albert Darmo
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on July 17, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Outstanding in every way. Incredible visual interest in the lines and colors. A very beautiful image
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on July 17, 2011 at 7:45 PM
From the thumnail I thought this was a Calla kept inside a funky vase :cool: . Outstanding would mean less praise for this, Gary. Great creativity and super processing.

PS : There is a small - next to the leaf tip of the left of the frame. On my monitor the - does not seem to be connected to the main leaf. If you intend to print this, revisit that -.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on July 17, 2011 at 9:24 PM
Thanks everyone for your comments.

Pat:
I started off with only the calla and leaf on the right. The image looks okay like two dancers in step with one another but a little tame. I decided to add some tension to the composition by adding a the left leaf as a dark horse trying to cut in - so I am glad you feel 'its crowding in' (smile). May be the left leaf could be a little slimmer or rotated a little??

Sandy, Ram:
The tip of the left leaf is dried up and its pointing directly at the tip of the right leaf. It may be a little dark. I will try to brighten this area or clone it out for the archive copy.

Charlie:
No offence taken. I respect your view and in fact I started photog with that exact view but I have since dropped that 'baggage' and feel more free to express my creativity. By definition all flower arrangements are not natural - it is created by the artist arranging the various natural elements which usually do not grow together in the wild but in fact may be sourced from different parts of the world.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on July 18, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Highly original composition, Gary, with great execution. I was not sure at first about the colour of the calla but I think its subdued tone helps create the feel of the image, which reminds me a bit of Art Deco graphic design
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Comment posted by Morgan Casey on July 18, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Beautiful lines and detail. The subtle lighting works for me, as does the composition. Nicely done. :smile:
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on July 18, 2011 at 10:32 PM
Brilliant! :toast: :toast:
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Comment posted by Krunal Janani on July 19, 2011 at 8:09 AM
WOW Gary :toast:
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Comment posted by Bob&Charly Nelson on July 20, 2011 at 12:04 AM
WOW! If these leaves were positioned, you made great art. If these leaves grew this way, you made great art. The finest calla I have seen Gary.
Bob
Registered on October 27, 2005, 289 Posts, 4202 Comments
Comment posted by Giuseppe Guadagno on July 20, 2011 at 5:08 PM
Gary, I have no word for this. The design painted on the blackboard is fascinating, but it's the light that makes the photo for me. Beautiful.
Take care.
Registered on February 3, 2007, 827 Posts, 5052 Comments