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by Sindy Burk

Gallery: FloraPosted August 4, 2011101 views14 comments
Good morning,

Took this one a few months ago, forgot about it, I love it when I find pics and can work them all over again.
I like the comp. and soft colours in here. But not sure if it is too busy?
Comments appreciated!
Sindy

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on August 4, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Sindy,

I don't remember commenting on one of your images before so welcome to the Flora gallery.

Beautiful colors in this. I think the bg is a touch busy but mostly I'm not connecting with the composition. The in focus blooms are interesting but I don't think they're emphasized enough in the image to really get my attention. A crop from the bottom might help but the blooms still are not at power points or distributed in the image in a way that catches my eye. Certainly no big deal and it may just be me. See what the others say. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your posts and welcome again.

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Charlie Baugh on August 4, 2011 at 9:51 AM
You have achieved as a significant part of this image something I try, but don't get as good and that is sharp edges of a flower with all else blended oof support to your subject flowers. I like that you have three separate flowers showing us a different view of themselves. I like it Sindy
Registered on April 18, 2011, 329 Posts, 1985 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on August 4, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Sindy, Welcome to the Flora Forum :cool: and thanks for a fine opening post.

I like that airy dreamy limited Depth of Field look for this photo and the nice pastel shades of reddish pinks and yellows. I can see where Pat is coming from but in my opinion this would be a stronger shot if the OOF bud in the bottom left was not there or even more blurred.

But this has impact exactly as posted also :toast:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Morgan Casey on August 4, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Wonderful bokeh! The colors really pop and the comp works for me. Nicely done. :smile:
Registered on November 16, 2010, 22 Posts, 269 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on August 4, 2011 at 11:51 AM
The pastel reds meld well with the overall softness of the image to create a dreamy image. It took me a while to find the sharp spots, but they add a touch of reality. Great shot.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Brigitte Lorenz on August 4, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Hi Sindy,
welcome to Flora Gallery....wonderful soft and dreamy image!!!

Brigitte
Registered on January 10, 2009, 187 Posts, 1507 Comments
Comment posted by David Cobb on August 4, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Love the soft touch and selective focus use here Sindy.
Registered on December 14, 2007, 312 Posts, 3243 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on August 4, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Marvelous softness here, and the colors quite beautiful.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Miro Susta on August 5, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Marvelous colors-excellent DOF & BG acc. to my taste. Not busy at all. May be I'd suggest cropping a bit the bottom part. Nicely done Sindy.
Registered on August 18, 2006, 719 Posts, 3736 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Willison on August 5, 2011 at 8:26 PM
Nice use of color and space. The dreamlike quality is enchanting.
Registered on April 10, 2009, 292 Posts, 3967 Comments
Comment posted by Giuseppe Guadagno on August 7, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Beautiful photo of a beautiful flower. About you question, what do you think about a 5:4 format, that exclude the upper area of the photo?
Take care.
Registered on February 3, 2007, 827 Posts, 5052 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Dayton on August 7, 2011 at 8:51 PM
Lovely, Sindy! It's not too busy for me; however, you might experiment with a
top crop in which you eliminate the uppermost bloom. Nevertheless, its presence
makes for a very unique image as posted. Good choice of DOF. I like the near
high key effect.
Registered on November 11, 2008, 281 Posts, 3958 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on August 8, 2011 at 9:29 PM
Hi Sindy :wavey: Yes!!! It's a bit busy, what to crop? there are different opinions posted here, my choice would to crop the top section. Gigi.s idea of a 5:4 format would make this image even better :smile:
Albert Darmo
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on August 13, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Sindy: I got buried at the office the past week or so and missed commenting on your first post here. I like this very much as is and would merely suggest a crop from the bottom to 4:5 ratio. Great to have you aboard the finest Flora gallery on the planet and looking forward to more. >=))> :wavey:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments