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Wasp after a sugar fix
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Wasp after a sugar fix

by Paul Whippey

Gallery: Regional: UKNPPosted September 16, 2011114 views11 comments
Hello all. I've just joined the forums after lurking for some time following a recommendation from a member. It seems that this is the only place to get real critique, other sites just give oohs and aahs, which are nice to get, but not at all helpful.

I've got a large hedera helix plant at the bottom of my garden which is attracting lots of wasps. It took quite a while to get a shot of a wasp in a pleasing pose.

Canon 7D, EF 300mm f/4L IS USM and extension tube set. Manual exposure, 1/250 sec, f/11, ISO 100. Camera mounted flashgun, handheld. Imported with CS5 camera RAW, sharpened in CS5.

C&c's would be very welcome!

Cheers,

Paul.

Comments

11 comments
Comment posted by Phil Ellard on September 16, 2011 at 1:37 PM
:wavey: Welcome Paul pleased you have joined. It is a good forum and I hope you get as much out of it as I have. You have acheived good detail on the head though a background colour that is very different from the wasp would help extenuate this further, also it would be better with with the tail unobstructed and i would avoid subject dead centre. But it is as you say a pleasing pose and a good first post. I have not taken a macro shot ever so others may give better advice :biggrin: :toast:
Registered on December 17, 2010, 60 Posts, 634 Comments
Comment posted by David Taylor on September 16, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Welcome Paul, :wavey: You've chosen one of my favourite subjects as your first post. I wish the wasps in my garden would choose my ivy flowers and leave my pears alone. :rolleyes: Only kidding, they're quite welcome to feast on the ones pecked by those accursed blackbirds. :smile: :wink: I'm a bit of an iconoclast so I don't mind dead centre and BIF. :biggrin:

I find your image a little harsh on my monitor, did you diffuse your flash?

When I was shooting 2D, I tended to use f14 to f18 for good DOF at macro distances, mind you I am now using f9 on my 3D Fujifilm W3, which is its minimum aperture and getting good results (for me :wink:)

I also like to get up close and personal, between 2 and 3 inches, for maximum magnification using my set-up.

Keep those macros coming.

:toast: :toast: :jump:
Registered on April 24, 2006, 101 Posts, 837 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Whippey on September 16, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Thanks for taking the time to comment and make me feel so welcome Phil and David!

Phil, thanks for the critique. That makes perfect sense and very useful, I'll bear your advice in mind when composing and backgrounds. I normally try and avoid dead centred shots, but this one slipped through! :wink:

David, also thanks for your comments! :wavey: I didn't diffuse the flash and I agree with you about it being harsh, I'll try out a few diffusers next time. I'm also a wasp fan, even though I've been stung by the blighters lots of times!

Thanks guys, this is a fantastic forum! :toast:
Registered on September 16, 2011, 16 Posts, 69 Comments
Comment posted by John Robinson on September 16, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Hi Paul
Good to see a new participant on the forum. You will enjoy it.
The comments so far make sense and I would add trying a vertcal crop.
Cheers
John R
Registered on March 2, 2008, 535 Posts, 2453 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Whippey on September 16, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Thanks John, It's great to feel so welcome on here. Thanks for the crop suggestion as well! :wavey:
Registered on September 16, 2011, 16 Posts, 69 Comments
Comment posted by Bob Johnson on September 17, 2011 at 3:12 AM
Hi Paul & welcome to the forum. I am not a macro man but this looks pretty smart although I would echo Phil's comment about the BG. As you have them visiting regularly perhaps you could experiment by hanging your own back drop of a colour that works well with the wasp :wink:

Bob :smile:
Registered on December 8, 2010, 17 Posts, 169 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Whippey on September 17, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Thanks Bob, cracking idea I'll give that a try! :toast:
Registered on September 16, 2011, 16 Posts, 69 Comments
Comment posted by Phil Shaw on September 17, 2011 at 3:15 PM
The centred composition works well in this instance and given the available information it is difficult to envisage a subject placement that would work better. The bright brown object in the background is a major distraction, but I guess you knew that already. As David has already indicated, using a diffuser with the flash would remove that harshness and improve the lighting. I would sggest the Westcott Micro Apollo, though others may have alternative suggestions. Hope you're enjoying the 7D.
Registered on July 25, 2005, 26 Posts, 110 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Whippey on September 18, 2011 at 6:16 AM
Hi Phil,

Thanks for your comments. I suppose I could have composed it with more of the flower in the frame, but that may distract the eye as well? I'm going to try a few backrounds, once the damn rain stops! :mad:

Thanks for the diffuser suggestion, I'll order one up. The 7D is an amazing bit of gear, I'm very impressed by the detail coming off the sensor and the focus system is a huge improvement. Thanks for making the buying decision an easy one! :toast:

Cheers,

Paul.
Registered on September 16, 2011, 16 Posts, 69 Comments
Comment posted by Andy Shepherd on September 19, 2011 at 9:00 AM

Welcome to the forum, Paul :wavey:

This is a good opening image of a pretty overlooked subject matter, keep em coming.

Andy...
Registered on September 24, 2006, 123 Posts, 1254 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Whippey on September 22, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Thanks Andy!
Registered on September 16, 2011, 16 Posts, 69 Comments