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Try Try Again

by Jim Greenwood

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 10, 2011223 views11 comments
I photographed this scene in east Zion a couple of years ago. I was pretty happy with my results then. ( See It's All About the Light ) (Okay ... maybe it's not ALL about the light. :wink: ) This year I returned and found conditions to be quite different. Better results? I think so. What do you think?

Canon 5DII
Canon 16-35mm f/2.8L II
16mm, f/16, 0.5 seconds, ISO 50

Comments

11 comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on December 10, 2011 at 9:57 AM
I love this one. The wide angle perspective gives it a great look and the colors are bold and vibrant, but not over the top. Beautifully balanced composition, too. Excellent!! :toast:
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Ken Smith on December 10, 2011 at 10:31 AM
Nice fall colors...the bark seems strongly saturated...when combined with the size of the trunk whose top portion is looking greater in diameter (lens distortion?) this may be taking up too much of the composition. The rock details opposite of the fine yellow leaves are balancing and attractive.
Registered on September 5, 2008, 449 Posts, 2444 Comments
Comment posted by Margaret Summers on December 10, 2011 at 10:37 AM
The light is definitely important. Here it is very even and calming. I love the naturalness of the scene.
Registered on May 24, 2011, 54 Posts, 99 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on December 10, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Beautiful composition and color. It appears to be a bit oversharpened on my monitor though.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on December 10, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Well, the original was way too blue (surprisingly no one was bothered by that) but i liked the comp better, better color mix and the vertical was better for the tree. I'd fix the WB on the original and declare success :wink:
But...if you had never made the mistake of referring me to your fabulous initial attempt, i would have said this is a real cool shot, I like the perspective a lot. Its a tiny bit oversharpened--otherwise looks great!
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on December 10, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Jim, This is wonderful! I prefer this one over the first one you shot, but think that is mostly because of the color. This is a beautiful scene!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 10, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Jim,

Ditto to Harley's comments. Additionally I'll tell you that I think both images are excellent. Both have a sense of that wide angle distortion, yet it's not something that makes want to have it corrected. If that makes sense. Excellent combination of colors in a strong and bold composition. Well done on all accounts.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Daniel Rappaport on December 10, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Great composition color and perspective
Registered on September 9, 2009, 294 Posts, 2006 Comments
Comment posted by Andy Richards on December 11, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Jim: Yes, better in terms of light, conditions you found, and composition. I think this second composition is much more dynamic. I like the way the diagonal lines of the tree trunk and the smaller tree on the right repeat, and the much smaller tree on the left, going the other direction in counterpoint.

Agree on the oversharpening. Went to the large view to see if it was just the compression. Still seems just slightly oversharpened for monitor viewing.

Love everything else about the shot (first shot was good, but agree this is better)
Registered on November 7, 2010, 37 Posts, 114 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Willison on December 11, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Love the point of view, the slanting layered rocks and wonderful color. The awesome texture makes me want to touch it all.
Registered on April 10, 2009, 292 Posts, 3967 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on December 11, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Exquisite composition with beautiful color. The textures and detail that you brought out in the bark, leaves, and the forest floor I find quite remarkable. Since you asked, I much prefer this image over the other. The composition seems to work better with the horizontal, and the colors, well everything, seems to really make this sing.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments