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Black-necked Stilts w/ repost
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Black-necked Stilts w/ repost

by Tonia Graves

Gallery: AvianPosted January 1, 2012115 views11 comments
Nikon D5100 w/ 200-400VR + TC14E
ISO 200, F5.6, 1/250 sec.
80% of original image
Location: Gilbert Water Ranch - Gilbert, AZ

So in my last post many of you commented on either getting a lower angle or catching a full reflection on the stilt. Here is another image from that same shoot but w/ 2 stilts & their reflections. I would like to know if you all think this one works better. Thankyou in advance for your comments/critiques!

Comments

11 comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on January 1, 2012 at 9:14 PM
These are some of my favorite birds to photograph there. I think even a lower angle would make it more unique. Sometimes it's impossible to get low enough in some of the viewing areas. I think you did the best you could here. My only suggestion might be taking some off the right side or if you cropped from the left to bring back some of that end. The bird to the left seems too close to the edge of the frame for me. I'd love to see what other types of birds you were able to photograph here.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Hali Sowle on January 1, 2012 at 9:34 PM
I have to agree with Peter that I would have liked to see more room on the left and a little less on the right, that being said there is a nice detail in the feathers and nice reflections, a very nice image.
Registered on January 9, 2008, 36 Posts, 582 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Schiebelbein on January 1, 2012 at 9:54 PM
I agree with the suggestions about the cropping. That said, you have captured a very pleasing image with the dynamics of the two birds. The ripples and reflections add to the image. Well done. :toast:
Registered on November 8, 2008, 55 Posts, 393 Comments
Comment posted by John Blumenkamp on January 1, 2012 at 11:46 PM
Hi Tonia... I like the interaction you've captured, with the one stilt looking on as the other dips the water. I think the crop suggestion is worth playing with and seeing how that works.
Registered on February 26, 2011, 58 Posts, 313 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Hackley on January 2, 2012 at 2:08 AM
I happen to like this one better but just slightly, they are both good shots. Nice job getting both birds is focus. Interesting play of light with one bird showing some iridescent shine and the other not and one birds legs are slightly redder than the other. I also like the suggestion of the crop. Nice job in getting this, way to go.
Registered on September 17, 2009, 302 Posts, 5535 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Dudley on January 2, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Nice exposure and sharpness on both birds. I too would play a little with the crop here.
Registered on March 30, 2007, 437 Posts, 10915 Comments
Comment posted by Tonia Graves on January 2, 2012 at 11:29 AM
Thank you all so much for your suggestions. I am posting an un-cropped version so you can see what I had to work with (although it's a little centered for my tastes). Next time I'm working with water birds I will have to try to get down on their level. Thanks again for your help!

Rob-While I was there I managed to get some decent shots of a Great Egret, un-ID's hummers, and some mockingbirds.
Registered on October 29, 2011, 92 Posts, 1035 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on January 2, 2012 at 1:48 PM
With both birds, the center framing works because you have even space from each side. You could even try taking some off the top and bottom for more of a panoramic image. But the un-cropped version gives balance to the main subjects.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Gatlin on January 2, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Tonia, I believe I'd crop in fairly equally from all sides, maintaining the same aspect ratio. with both the birds seemingly focused on the same point, I would place that point very close to the center of the image. nice work with the exposure, and I like the iridescence showing. the lower you get with these, the more the viewer will be transported into the image, rather than being outside, looking down on the subjects.
Registered on March 21, 2009, 202 Posts, 4187 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Bielefeld on January 2, 2012 at 6:00 PM
I like the shot Tonia. I played around with the comp of this image and I would crop up from the bottom to just under the left bird's head reflection and also take a bit off the top if this were mine.
Registered on December 6, 2008, 360 Posts, 7132 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Bunch on January 3, 2012 at 11:26 AM
I agree with the previous cropping suggestions. It is a nice shot but it just looks a little unbalanced. The birds, the poses and the relections are very attractive. They seem to be dressed for a formal occasion. :smile:
Registered on May 18, 2004, 124 Posts, 2503 Comments