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Vantage Point - SEO

by John Launstein

Gallery: AvianPosted January 5, 2012236 views14 comments
Things have been pretty slow around here for wildlife and avian photography, thanks in large part to the near-constant high winds of late, so I decided to take another look through my 2011 files.

I almost processed and posted this image a half-dozen times last year, but could never quite decide if it "worked."

I really enjoy photographing animals in a way that shows their habitat, but this image always seemed like an "alomost" to me...except for the lines of the fence. For whatever reason, I really like the flow and variation of the posts and wires, and love the dusky feel to this shot.

The OOF foregound vegetation is slightly bothersome to me. I am normally very tolerant of such, but here it doesn't quite seem to work as well or at least seems to take away more than it gives...but it does keep the snow from running off the edge of the image and pulling the eye down from the owl and fence lines some.

This is a slight crop from the left and bottom. I actually like the full-frame as much or better, but the excessive OOF grasses compelled me to crop at least some of it away.

I have a twin shot with the owl looking back over his shoulder to his left (our right) which I like better as a pose, but with him on the right 1/3 already it doesn't give him much area to "look into."

What are your thoughts? Is this a keeper? Any suggestions for further improvement?

Many thanks...

Nikon D7000
Nikkor AF-S 300mm f/4 IF-ED with TC-14EII
ISO 200
1/500sec @ f/5.6 (mistakenly shot at -0.3EV instead of +0.3EV)
shot resting on truck roof for best available angle and support
blend of three exposure layers and slight adjustment to highlights and shadows in PS CS5

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Terry Sohl on January 5, 2012 at 3:29 PM
Neat! I like the composition. The "curved" fence makes it unique, I like the amount of foreground habitat, and I like the muted background sky.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 513 Posts, 6889 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on January 5, 2012 at 3:54 PM
Definitely NOT a "keeper" - (send it to me!)


Seriously, I like this a lot - nice owly pose, interestng fecne , snow, and weeds. Don't mind the OOF weeds at all.
I'm not entirely comfortable with the large amount of dead space at the top - you might experiment with a more traditional verticl crop a little tighter around the owl.
Nice as is, though.

Happy New Year to you and the kids and wife!
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Max Waugh on January 5, 2012 at 4:11 PM
John, I like the geometry of the fence. The only thing that bugs me a bit is that the busy foreground interferes a bit with the stark silhouettes (owl and fence) and the sky. I actually don't mind the empty sky so much, and wonder how this would look with the snow and most of the foreground plantlife cropped out. That may emphasize the owl/fence pattern more.

Lots of possibilities, obviously... it's a cool shot.

Max
Registered on September 26, 2008, 428 Posts, 2329 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Bielefeld on January 5, 2012 at 5:01 PM
John, I too like this. The curving fence and transitional sky makes this work for me along with the owl. If this were mine I would crop up from the bottom elimination most of the OOF grass. Well done overall.
Registered on December 6, 2008, 360 Posts, 7132 Comments
Comment posted by Keith Bauer on January 5, 2012 at 5:17 PM
John: Overall, I like the image. It tells me a story about the owl and it's habitat. The compositional placement of the owl works well left to right for me. I'm in the camp of a little less sky. OOF grasses don't seem to bother me on this image and they usually do. Nice capture.
Registered on November 20, 2003, 458 Posts, 4836 Comments
Comment posted by Sharon Hallowell on January 5, 2012 at 5:46 PM
This is fabulous!...please don't hesitate to post shots like this in the future! My suggestion to improve it would be a crop off the left to just past the tallest twig, and then the same amount off the top. Love it! Sharon
Registered on November 1, 2003, 392 Posts, 4810 Comments
Comment posted by Ray Whitt on January 5, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Wonderful shot, makes me feel as if I'm right there.

Ray
Registered on May 27, 2011, 92 Posts, 2619 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Harris on January 5, 2012 at 8:09 PM
I liked this image the minute I saw it. Even more when I reviewed the larger image. I get a sense of this is the Owl's territory from this scene. I like it as is.
Registered on August 2, 2010, 169 Posts, 741 Comments
Comment posted by Hali Sowle on January 5, 2012 at 10:06 PM
I like this as well, it really is a nice story of the owl and its territory. I think the negative space on the top is nice because of the gentle color gradation it gives me that nice late day feeling, and the taller grasses really don't bother me much
Registered on January 9, 2008, 36 Posts, 582 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Gatlin on January 5, 2012 at 10:26 PM
interesting lines to this, John, I really like the composition. I'm not crazy about the oof grasses, but I do think it's a keeper.
Registered on March 21, 2009, 202 Posts, 4187 Comments
Comment posted by keith mitchell on January 6, 2012 at 3:08 AM
Hello John.
Some good suggestions for you to think about,but from my point of view i do think it's great as it is.

Keith. :smile:
Registered on July 12, 2008, 127 Posts, 1735 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Rhodus on January 6, 2012 at 8:16 AM
John, overall I like this image. I find that the contrast produced by the soft oof wash of grasses and razor sharp barbed wire & posts command most of the attention. I find my eyes wandering amongst the details of those elements and therefore the owl becomes a supporting element.
Registered on November 16, 2003, 157 Posts, 3326 Comments
Comment posted by Jenaya Launstein on January 6, 2012 at 2:18 PM
Awesome image, dad! He's got a really cool pose. I like the comp, and the little bit of pink in the sky looks really nice!
Registered on February 8, 2011, 254 Posts, 1302 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Schiebelbein on January 6, 2012 at 10:35 PM
I like this shot and the habitat it shows. You have turned the fenceline and posts into an attractive element of the photo. The owl seems to fit right into the composition. The OOF grass does not bother me, though I do wish the weeds on the left were a bit smaller. I know what you mean about the winds, pretty much everything down here is sitting pretty tight as well. :wink:
Registered on November 8, 2008, 55 Posts, 393 Comments