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symphony in B minor
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symphony in B minor

by Stuart Williams

Gallery: LandscapePosted February 5, 2012985 views20 comments
among the travels and travails over the past seven months, i spent a little over three weeks in canada visiting the in-laws (and various other out-laws). a few days escape took us canoe camping to parc de la maurice to find some peace and space. but rather than be filled with music, aside from the haunting calls of the loon, it was eerily silent. the light was the music, still and beautiful.

thanks for the comments on my last post - most helpful and appreciated - and thanks for taking a look at this. again, your comments and thoughts are appreciated.

hasselblad 500c/m, 150mm, delta 100 b&w film.
parc de la maurice, quebec, canada.

Comments

20 comments
Comment posted by Anthony Vincent on February 5, 2012 at 12:30 PM
One of those images that strikes a 'chord' with me. Simple and effective. I too love the haunting call of loons, one of my favorite birds.
Great image Stuart
Registered on February 5, 2009, 199 Posts, 2775 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on February 5, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Very nice image. Excellent mood and artistry to this. I do find the upper half is a little washed out, and I prefer this as a horizontal cropped just above the darker reeds. Just my subjective opinion, of course.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Stuart Williams on February 5, 2012 at 12:50 PM
you're right - scott - it could work with a crop as well. let's see if anybody else mentions this. thanks for the comment - appreciated. thanks too anthony.
Registered on December 7, 2007, 247 Posts, 4792 Comments
Comment posted by Ant on February 5, 2012 at 2:04 PM
Spendid, minimal and extremely attracting. Where really less is more... I like it a lot. It reminds me of some
old elemental landscapes of Harry Callahan (the photographer, not the detective...).
Registered on April 13, 2009, 27 Posts, 474 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on February 5, 2012 at 3:14 PM
And a beautiful score it is. :smile:
There is an element of mystery with the mist in the top half, but it does work as a crop to. Well, now you have two shots for the price of one. :wink:
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Greg Lessard on February 5, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Interesting composition and title. I like the repeated patterns of the grasses, although I would be tempted to crop the upper portion just above the foreground grasses. What inspired the title?
Registered on January 14, 2009, 38 Posts, 219 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on February 5, 2012 at 4:06 PM
I really like the simple comp. of this image. The crop is fine as is, but I also think there are other crops that could even focus the attention on the prominent stems at the front of the image.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Danny Laureys on February 5, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Love this, I would either crop this also or clone out the lighter reeds,which would give you more empty space above, which I like.But I think I would go for the crop on this one :toast:
Registered on January 5, 2008, 590 Posts, 1261 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on February 5, 2012 at 5:08 PM
Absolutely love the design of your image, Stuart. The strong graphic appeal of these grasses set against that wonderful light gray makes these grasses appear to be suspended in mid air. I also love the contrast between the foreground grasses and those in the background; the further grasses almost act like a soft echo of those in front and to me further your title / intent. While I can appreciate the suggestions on a crop, I wouldn't touch this, in all honesty. This is superb as presented, a stunning b/w image.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on February 5, 2012 at 5:17 PM
Beautiful and minimalistic Stuart. I really like it just the way it is since a crop would make this loose its very ethereal character.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Jean Day on February 5, 2012 at 9:18 PM
I also see two lovely comps here, each one strong enough to stand on its own. :toast:
Registered on April 10, 2011, 36 Posts, 306 Comments
Comment posted by Stuart Williams on February 5, 2012 at 11:29 PM
thanks to all for comments - all very much appreciated. like you all, i presume, i walk out of the door with a camera in hand and then try to live within the frame that it presents. each camera has it's own frame - that which one can see within the viewfinder and maybe translated one day into a print. i use the hassy quite a lot at present - i enjoy the fact that i can carry two or three magazines, each loaded with a different film; i enjoy the glass afforded by the zeiss lenses - so i live within the 6x6 frame that comes with it. (and i believe i would enjoy working with a 5x4 - for the added control that one would have over the exposure - development process to produce fine negatives.) i rarely - very rarely - look at a scene and think, okay, i will crop this down. hence my preconception was largely borne out here. the crop has merits no doubt, but i'm living comfortably with this as it is.

as for the title, greg, it seemed to me that the grasses were as musical notes; maybe a touch unfinished, as with schubert ...

thanks again to all. happy to hear what anyone else has to say!
Registered on December 7, 2007, 247 Posts, 4792 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Baumbach on February 6, 2012 at 8:22 AM
This is very nice. It reminds me a bit of Michael Kenna.

- Dan
Registered on November 1, 2003, 473 Posts, 7980 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Marcellini on February 6, 2012 at 12:25 PM
I love it, lots of comps available but this one works as well as any.
Registered on November 27, 2007, 250 Posts, 2468 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on February 6, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Very Pretty Stuart. I like the minimal approach you've taken. I like the composition and format you've chosen, but agree a horizontal format would work as well. Nicely seen.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on February 6, 2012 at 6:21 PM
Beautiful. Works as presented and works cropped down. Real sweet and simple!
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on February 6, 2012 at 7:35 PM
Maybe im just having deja vu, but im pretty sure ive seen this before, or something similar from you. Anyhow, looks perfect to me, i wouldnt crop at all, the top guys really add a lot here. :smile:
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Zack Clothier on February 7, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Wonderfully simple and effective, nice work Stuart.
Registered on January 28, 2010, 343 Posts, 2257 Comments
Comment posted by Stuart Williams on February 7, 2012 at 12:47 PM
just deja vu, stan - or something. i have, i confess, posted some reeds before but not quite like this. the moment caught my eye and i couldn't resist!
Registered on December 7, 2007, 247 Posts, 4792 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on February 7, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Loons...my favorite sound in nature! This is a wonderful image Stuart! I really love the feel of this, and perfect just as it is for me. Excellent work!
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments