Spillway + repost

Gallery: Man & NaturePosted April 5, 2012121 views6 comments

This is a spillway that connects the Augusta Canal and the Savannah River. The path is used for hikers, runners and walkers.
Let me know what you think.....thanks
Bob

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Comment posted by Mark Seaver on April 6, 2012 at 10:03 AM

Very interesting structure with great repeated lines. I could see cropping almost to the brightly lit tree trunk to give even more emphasis to the spillway and how it heads into the distance. Looks like a neat spot to hang out and to photograph.

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Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on April 6, 2012 at 1:53 PM

I really like the graphic nature of this scene. The left side does seem a little dark and a crop as Mark mentioned might help. Nicely done.

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Comment posted by Bob&Charly Nelson on April 6, 2012 at 7:05 PM

I made some adjustments, let me know what you think.
Bob

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Comment posted by Mark Seaver on April 8, 2012 at 8:29 PM

Bob, I think the adjustments work well. They really emphasize the repeating patterns in the structure. I like how your crop also makes the bridge seem larger.

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Comment posted by Larry Lynch on April 10, 2012 at 9:48 AM

Beautiful light and comp.

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Comment posted by Miro Susta on April 30, 2012 at 9:14 AM

Nice composition, IMO both versions are very good, Can't say which is better. Nicely done.

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