Gallery: LandscapePosted June 12, 2012105 views3 comments
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Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on June 12, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Jose - I think a little less sky and opening up the shadow might make for a much more interesting image. The clouds have potential for some drama, but some of the highlight seem lost. A reprocess might help this one.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on June 12, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Jose,
I don't think I've had a chance to welcome you to NPN yet - so welcome aboard! It may be helpful if you could include some information in your post. Are you looking for critique, suggestions or just wanting to share? the more you can provide the better and more feedback you may receive.
I actually like the forms and curves here and the specular highlights work well for me. I would agree that the shadows are dark. There may be some nice patterns in the sand, but we just can't see them. then again, that does make this a more graphic image showcasing the shapes and curves. I do like the composition and square format.
Again, a bit more info and perhaps I could provide some better feedback or suggestions. Just not sure what you're looking for.
Thanks for posting.
Lon
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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on June 13, 2012 at 9:20 PM
Agree with Harry cropping suggestion. Less sky puts a nice emphasis on the shapes and contrasts in the land.
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3 commentsI don't think I've had a chance to welcome you to NPN yet - so welcome aboard! It may be helpful if you could include some information in your post. Are you looking for critique, suggestions or just wanting to share? the more you can provide the better and more feedback you may receive.
I actually like the forms and curves here and the specular highlights work well for me. I would agree that the shadows are dark. There may be some nice patterns in the sand, but we just can't see them. then again, that does make this a more graphic image showcasing the shapes and curves. I do like the composition and square format.
Again, a bit more info and perhaps I could provide some better feedback or suggestions. Just not sure what you're looking for.
Thanks for posting.
Lon