Gallery: FloraPosted June 29, 201272 views8 comments
Re-post based on feedback. Thanks for the suggestions.
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8 comments
Comment posted by Carolyn Derstine on June 29, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Much better, Bunn! This comp feels "right" to me. A lovely image of a lovely flower! However, if you ever want to print it large, there are a few minor processing artifacts--some barely visible lines to the right of the bottom petal and some cloning "ghosts" to the left of the bottom petal--that you may want to clean up first.
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Comment posted by Ken Smith on June 29, 2012 at 3:13 PM
I like those dew drops...looks like the rain pounded it into submission! Treat seeing the center with escaping pistols. DOF is good...puts the weight on the very center.
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Comment posted by John Williams on June 29, 2012 at 3:56 PM
What a beauty. I like how the inner portion is hinted at; it is quite the tease.
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Comment posted by Walt Sterneman on June 29, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Nice job Bunn. The water drops are quite nice.
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Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on June 29, 2012 at 10:34 PM
Bunn - Good take on the Lotus. Love the water drops and being able to see the yellow portions in the center in a peekaboo fashion.
Reducing the exposure a bit might bring forward slightly more saturated pinks.
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Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on June 30, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Bunn:
I like the original but this one is even better. Just lovely
If you have time, please comment on others' postings as well. It may be intimidating at first but you will find that you also learn a lot from the exercise; copy what others have done and avoid their mistakes without having to make them yourselves
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Comment posted by Bill Fach on June 30, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Bunn: This is wonderful. Terrific subject superbly presented. >=))>
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on July 4, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Radiant.
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8 commentsReducing the exposure a bit might bring forward slightly more saturated pinks.
I like the original but this one is even better. Just lovely
If you have time, please comment on others' postings as well. It may be intimidating at first but you will find that you also learn a lot from the exercise; copy what others have done and avoid their mistakes without having to make them yourselves