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Gallery: AvianPosted July 19, 2012146 views6 comments
White-crowned Sparrow perched on a young Douglas Fir in the Oregon Dunes National Recreation Area.
Canon 7d
100-400mm at 400mm
f5.6
1/2000
ISO 400
Processed in ACR and PS5
Thanks for looking. Comments and Critique appreciated
Comments
6 comments
Comment posted by Ron Bielefeld on July 19, 2012 at 7:14 AM
A great comp Allen. Love the look back too.
Registered on December 6, 2008, 360 Posts, 7132 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on July 19, 2012 at 11:19 AM
A nice look at this fellow - good pose and great branch. I'd personally move him off dead-center, but fine as is.
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on July 19, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Neat composition and a great perch, Allen. To my eye it looks like you might want to back off just a bit on the saturation and contrast, though this presentation is pretty eye-popping.
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on July 19, 2012 at 4:26 PM
A favorite species; an unusual perch. Contrast and saturation both seem on the high side.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by Kurt Bowman on July 23, 2012 at 7:30 AM
I lie the comp except that you chose to center it. I am okay with centered images once in awhile, but with the branch and bird, it seems a little too much for my taste and would off-center this. I agree with Richard about the processing and think a few small changes could improve this and make it even better than what it already is.
Registered on June 19, 2008, 1005 Posts, 8028 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on July 25, 2012 at 5:49 PM
Cool T shaped perch and look back pose Allen.
The centered comp seems to work with this perch shape too.
I think the extra measure of contrast is within acceptable limits, and works well for this presentation IMHO.
Great job on this
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments
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6 commentsSandy
The centered comp seems to work with this perch shape too.
I think the extra measure of contrast is within acceptable limits, and works well for this presentation IMHO.
Great job on this