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Gallery: LandscapePosted August 9, 2012242 views5 comments
My first visit to Schwabacher Landing. Nikon D300 F22 1/24 ISO 200 Tokina 12-24 @22mm
Is it too wide ? I like the single shot pano look to it. I think the rule of thirds works well here as I cropped out the bulk of the sky.
Comments and critique always welcome
Andrew
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Comment posted by Mark Hopgood on August 10, 2012 at 12:08 AM
Very pretty location, good detail and exposure. Looks more like a postcard shot, although there is nothing wrong with that. I think it is a little wide as a standalone shot, however with other associated images it would work well. Perhaps I am a little biased as most of my landscapes are with a telephoto.
Registered on May 23, 2012, 5 Posts, 30 Comments
Comment posted by Carol Nichols on August 10, 2012 at 9:50 AM
Very beautiful shot Andrew. I like the pano composition, but I think I would cut off some of the trees on the left side because I don't think they add anything to the image.
Registered on November 7, 2007, 161 Posts, 1420 Comments
Comment posted by Jon LaBass on August 10, 2012 at 11:02 AM
I think this would look great as a b/w as you've got a lot of tonal contrast there.
Registered on June 9, 2008, 13 Posts, 63 Comments
Comment posted by Wick Smith on August 10, 2012 at 4:23 PM
I'd crop the trees from the left as well. Good job with the reflection & making sure the foreground rocks were not touching it. With this harsh light, it would look good as a B&W. Excellent capture.
Registered on June 12, 2009, 91 Posts, 379 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on August 11, 2012 at 9:03 PM
I remember my first visit here. Such and incredibly beautiful place. The comp looks good. The light is a bit harsh, but you've worked it quite well.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
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