Emergence

Gallery: LandscapePosted August 10, 2012575 views18 comments

Taken along the South Oregon coast at the end of May. After aborting my original plan of shooting rhodies in the Redwoods (a bit too soon), I decided to "scout" an area of coast I had been google-earthing prior to my trip. As it turned out, I lost cell service in this area, so randomly picked a pull-out and trailhead. I embarked on the main trail, and instinctively took what appeared to be a wild-boar path cut through the thick underbrush. Well, this view is where this path ended, and I was able to witness a very unexpected fiery sunset for this time of year. As always, I appreciate any comments or critiques-thanks for viewing.

Canon 5dmkII-3 shots hand blended for dynamic range (2 shots taken with 2 stop RGND)

Comments

18 comments

Comment posted by Richard Hartmann on August 10, 2012 at 12:31 AM

Yeah Jared, This sings. I like the high angle and tight framing around the rock. Just the right amount of water and sky makes this one stand out. The light ain’t bad either.

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Comment posted by Jack Garrett on August 10, 2012 at 12:35 AM

Man this is spot on in my opinion! All the major elements are there, exposure, comp, color. Nice job.

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Comment posted by Scott Smorra on August 10, 2012 at 12:52 AM

Awesome image Jared. I'm glad you found this location and were treated to some amazing light. My only nit is that I wish there was a little more room on the left side of the frame.

Registered on November 2, 2009, 161 Posts, 2143 Comments

Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on August 10, 2012 at 2:08 AM

Well that's a crazy view. Shadows look too recovered given the light going on...but overall you have something good to take away :)

aF

Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments

Comment posted by Kory Lidstrom on August 10, 2012 at 2:34 AM

This is awesome. Such a unique perspective. I really like this. Can you add a little breathing room on the left where the land touches the edge of the frame? Other than that one issue, I would have to say this is pretty much a masterpiece. Very fine work.

Registered on November 19, 2008, 49 Posts, 1035 Comments

Comment posted by Jared Atencio on August 10, 2012 at 9:59 AM

Thanks for the honest critique Aaron. I know the "look" you are referring too and agree with you on this point. It didn't appear nearly as pronounced in print as it does here (and compression/sharpening not helping here), but it would prob be worth going back into the RAW and seeing if I can get some cleaner shadows/detail there.

I also agree with the comments about the LHS and lack of separation. Believe it or not this was shot @ 16mm and I could barely fit this in the frame! In hindsight I might sacrifice a touch on the RHS to balance more, but I may try adding a few CA fill pixels on the LHS to see if that helps at all. Maybe a repost with all of the above tomorrow.

Thanks again.

Registered on June 23, 2009, 21 Posts, 422 Comments

Comment posted by Jeremy Cram on August 10, 2012 at 1:25 PM

Awesome Jared! I know this spot well...I also know the exposure there is to get this shot. It's pretty sketchy to lean out over that cliff. Well done!

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Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on August 10, 2012 at 3:48 PM

This is awesome. I wish there were a little bit more room on the left. otherwise I really like this one a lot.

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Comment posted by Wick Smith on August 10, 2012 at 4:19 PM

Super job. I love the tight crop, the light, and the shutter speed you used. Thanks for posting large!

Registered on June 12, 2009, 91 Posts, 379 Comments

Comment posted by Jim Hackley on August 10, 2012 at 5:37 PM

Stunning shot, everything comes together on this, what a great find and nice job in getting this difficult shot, well done.

Registered on September 17, 2009, 302 Posts, 5535 Comments

Comment posted by Eva McDermott on August 10, 2012 at 10:26 PM

Wonderful image Jared but I too wish there was a little more room on the left. Nice color in the sky, detail in the stack, and motion in the water.

Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments

Comment posted by Peter Conway on August 10, 2012 at 11:38 PM

Amazing. The waves against the front of the island work so well to balance the beautiful sky.

Peter

Registered on June 25, 2007, 347 Posts, 3913 Comments

Comment posted by John Williams on August 11, 2012 at 12:28 AM

Excellent! That is a dramatic scene, and the color really tops it off. Maybe a stitch next time to grab that left edge?

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Comment posted by Andreas Resch on August 11, 2012 at 9:14 AM

Amazing shot, Jared. Great effort on the blending too.

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Comment posted by Andreas Resch on August 11, 2012 at 9:16 AM

Amazing shot, Jared. Great effort on the blending too.

Registered on November 14, 2007, 322 Posts, 6101 Comments

Comment posted by Mark Metternich on August 11, 2012 at 3:54 PM

This area of the Oregon Coast is a gold mine! I have always said that. Problem is that is gets socked in with a marine layer a lot and often people never get to see it. Great job and shot here!!!

Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments

Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on August 11, 2012 at 9:09 PM

Very much like the texture you were able to bring out/retain in the rocks while also pulling out the fabulous sky. Quite a nice scene.

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Comment posted by Andrew Morrill on August 12, 2012 at 1:08 AM

I agree about the left being cut off, but it certainly doesn't take much away from what is a fantastic unique composition with amazing color. Congrats.

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