Quintessential Corbett
by Saurabh Singh
Hello respected members,
I would like to start my journey on NPN by this Mammal scape .
During summers Dhikala , One of the Asia’s largest grasslands in Corbett national park boast a wildlife spectacle where hundreds of Asiatic elephants gather on the banks of Ramganga river to bathe ,play and feed on the sprouting green grass.
Species: Asiatic elephant (Elephas maximus )
Location : Corbett national park
Date created : 08/6 /2012
Camera : Nikon D4
Lens : Nikkor 14-24 f/ 2.8 G at 24mm
Exposure : f /16 , Manual mode, 1 /320s, - 0.3 EV, Spot metering ,ISO 800, Handheld.
Thanks for taking out time and providing your valuable feedback .
Kindly view larger version for constructive critique.
Regards
Saurabh Singh
Comments
10 commentsThat being said, the larger version seems less so than the smaller version, so when printed big this comment might be moot.
As an alternate crop I might investigate shaving some off the top for a panoramic presentation.
Jagdeep Rajput
Welcome to NPN, and the Wildlife Gallery in particular. And a special thanks for jumping in and beginning commenting on images right away!
This is a very strong first post - it has a wonderful feel and "atmosphere" to it. It's so nice to see an animalscape with subtle, subdued colours (as opposed to them being on the "too punchy" side!). Both the technical aspects and composition of this image seem strong to me.
One minor "personal preference" nit for me: For my taste there is slightly too much foreground grass for my liking, and the grass closest to the bottom of the frame shows darker zones (almost like holes) that the rest of the grass doesn't really show. So, if this were mine I'd remove about 1/4 to 1/3 of the grass, which is overall a pretty small sliver. I think in doing this the grass would become a bit more homogenous in appearance and in-keeping with the harmony of this scene. But just a thought and a minor thing - this is very strong as posted.
Cheers...thanks for sharing this one...
Brad
Welcome to NPN! I'm sure you will find it to be a very welcoming community, and quite knowledgeable too.
As for the photo, awesome first post! As the others have said, the green to brown grass gradation, misty mountains, and of course the elephants are all great. I agree with the others that having the elephants larger in the frame would be nice. At the same time I feel that some of the grey sky at the top and some of the green grass at the bottom aren't really adding to the photo that much. Therefore, if it were my photo I would consider making a relatively long narrow panorama highlighting all of the most important parts of the scene- the mountains, the elephants, and the grass transition. Just my thoughts, do what you will with them!
Thanks for sharing and can't wait to see more!
-Cam