Gallery: LandscapePosted November 11, 2012171 views7 comments
Columbia Gorge trail. Canon 5DMk2, 24-105mm4L at 40mm. Polarizer. iso200, f16, 1/4sec.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 11, 2012 at 9:16 PM
Daniel,
I'm really liking the backlit leaves - it's amazing how much they can glow even in a diffused lighting situation like this. I'm kinda torn about the composition. I can see the attraction of including the fog and the forest background, but to me, I'm more interested in the beautiful leaves and the mossy branches - almost wish there was more of that.
The larger version actually shows much better, although it reveals some cleanup you might want to do with the intruding branches at the top of the frame. And of course the sky is what it is given the conditions, I'm just not sure how much it's helping the scene.
Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on November 11, 2012 at 11:29 PM
Really like the backlit leaves as well as the moss covered branches, set against the misty evergreen hillside in the background. Works so very well. I would consider cropping about half of the sky though; a scroll crop across the top at the level just below where the first branch on the left hand side emerges, seems to leave just enough sky to set the stage but not detract from the wonderful color and design of the remainder of the image. Just one opinion of course. Either way, very nice.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Zack Clothier on November 12, 2012 at 1:02 AM
Echoing whats already been said, I think the main attraction here is the mossy branches and the vibrant leaves. I like Vance's crop suggestion and might even take it a bit farther, down to where the yellow leaves start on the left..putting more focus at the bottom of the frame.
Registered on January 28, 2010, 343 Posts, 2257 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on November 12, 2012 at 9:41 AM
Beautiful glow in the leaves and moss on the lower left. I also like the isolated cloud near the center and think that it and the sky help tell the story of a cloudy/misty day. I too could see cropping the intruding branches at the top, but don't think you want to cut off the top of the tree just right of top center.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on November 12, 2012 at 10:22 AM
A different and interesting comp. I like the framing with the colorful treee. Nice mood with the fog, and the colors look natural.
Excellent detail in the large version, too. Well done.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on November 12, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Daniel, This is very nice! The foreground tree with the moss covered limbs looks great, and I like the light and colors too. The fog and misty mood is very nice as well. Think I would clone out the little branches coming in to the frame up top or a small crop there. Nice work!
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on November 12, 2012 at 12:30 PM
I can see what the others are saying about the top/bg, but personally i think it belongs here, it makes the shot more interesting to me, the odd mix of the two different subjects. Works for me!
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
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7 commentsI'm really liking the backlit leaves - it's amazing how much they can glow even in a diffused lighting situation like this. I'm kinda torn about the composition. I can see the attraction of including the fog and the forest background, but to me, I'm more interested in the beautiful leaves and the mossy branches - almost wish there was more of that.
The larger version actually shows much better, although it reveals some cleanup you might want to do with the intruding branches at the top of the frame. And of course the sky is what it is given the conditions, I'm just not sure how much it's helping the scene.
Lon
Excellent detail in the large version, too. Well done.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI