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Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on November 23, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Good detail, lighting and pose. Eye contact is good. I like the slightly open beak. I think you could safely crop some of the RHS and improve the balance. As is, everything feels a little crammed into the LHS.
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Comment posted by Jim Hansen on November 23, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Great job getting close to this tiny and hyperactive bird to create a nice image. Agree there's a lot of empty space on the right. Maybe a vertical or squarish crop?
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