Storybook Path

I think you've handled the tricky lighting well here John, I like the comp but I would tone down the vignette a bit.

Gary.

I like this a lot, John. The S-curve and dappled light are excellent. Like Gary, I find the vignette strong for my tastes, but it does give the image a storybook look - like peaking through a keyhole into another world, so if that's what you're after, I think it succeeds.

Thanks for looking and commenting, Gary and Scott. The keyhole look was the intent, but I understand and respect your reaction which is why I posted it; to find that out. Thought I'd post the starting image as I'm reminded of that old saying, "Leave well enough alone."

It's a fine composition, and I can certainly see it as a "storybook illustration." The mysterious trail coupled with all the wildflowers and foliage support this rendition. Realizing that the foreground is in the shade (with a little bit of dappled sun coming thru), and the background is in bright sunlight, this image is a real challenge to present. Especially considering that, IMO, the main subject is the trail (and which is in darker light), while the brightest areas above and in back of, are only supporting elements.
I do note a bluriness overall, but presume this is intentional, adding to the fantasy mood.
I can take or leave the strong vignette, as it would be befitting as a storybook illustration. I like the second version better as a "photograph," but still feel that the washed out background is too bright and distracting.

I do note a bluriness overall, but presume this is intentional, adding to the fantasy mood.

Actually, Michael, I didn't notice that bluriness, in fact I tried to make this as sharp as possible so it was not at all intentional. But to the extent it exists and works for you in the theme intent, I'm greatful for it having happened despite my intentions. I embrace accidental effects, and sometimes they kick the butt of my intentions entirely. (Not sure I can say "ass" on here but I would think that "butt" will be acceptable, and I apologize in advance if that was inappropriate.)

But seriously, Michael, I thank you for your thoughtful comments. They will be very beneficial to me going forward, as all comments are here on NPN. This is the first site I've encountered where the norm isn't, "nice shot, great image" etc., but rather an honest attempt to express genuine reactions to images in a civil way that can help everyone who posts here with the intention of continuous improvement.

With that said, regarding the level of luminance of the background, I'd say that my intent was to make that the focus; i.e., to leaving the woods, leaving the path, and going into, and merging with, the pure light that lies beyond. So I hope that makes more sense, Michael. I probably should have better explained what kind of storybook it was.

John, I see the storybook illustration in the first post and I think the vignette works for that, however, I think the 2nd post (original image) also has a storybook feel and it is even better to my eye. I suppose I'm thinking of it more as a photograph than just an illustration though... I like the light and your comp here John. This scene draws me in to it and I enjoy the feel. It does have a bit of softness and I'm thinking at least part of that is just from this light... and it works great here! Cheers!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI

John,

Wonderful and painterly scene. Dare I say and meant to be a compliment, but very "Kincadian" if I may say. Great job with the use of the vignette. I really like the fully lit tree in the bg too providing almost a source of light, or something. Beautiful image, well done.

Lon

I like the composition. It has a nice painterly feeling to it. I think the vignette could stay or go. I like the spotted light along the pathway and finally the "keyhole". ..

Thanks for your comments, Nick and Lon. I remember that the dappled light is what caught my eye that day and really was what was responsible for my stopping, setting up, and taking the picture.

Many years ago near where we lived in Ohio, there was a Thomas Kinkade gallery. It was across the border in Michigan. I remember going there with my wife and really liking the work and wanting to buy one, and I also remember the rather severe reaction from my wife, who has spent her life in the arts. So I definitely take the reference as a complement, Lon, realizing that others would not . Now, if I could only figure out a way to adopt his business model after I retire....

Do I stay on the path...or do I venture into the woods? The path seems a little scary to me...will I sink? Will I have better luck walking through the woods?

Well done, like the story book idea...it works!
HollyMorris

Good use of the path to lead the viewer through this scene.I'd prefer the second post. I'm not a big fan of this strong vigentting you used in the first version.Beautiful image

This is really beautiful! I love the quality of light from front to back & the scattering of wildflowers. I think either one has a story book look, but I have to say I prefer the second as I am not a huge fan of the vignette look.