Repost..Touching Down
by David E Lester
I got lucky again today to catch the eagle landing again here in Virginia behind my house. This time I used my 5D MKII instead of my 7D.
C&C welcome.
Canon 5D MKII, 100-400L @ 350mm, 1/1600sec, iso400, f/8, AP, Eval metering, tripod and croppped away about 70% of image for this comp.
Dave
Comments
10 commentsI do have two thoughts for you to consider as possible areas for improvement on an already-great image.
First, I'd be curious what this would look like with a different crop/comp. Specifically I'm wondering if there's a way to show the end of the branch (left) with a little blue margin without introducing other distracting elements...I feel this would be stronger if both ends of the branch didn't run out of the frame. I'm also curious about showing the main trunk on the right...maybe simply backing out a little with your crop and switching to a vertical 4X5 format? All this being said, I'm pretty sure you chose this presentation for very good reasons.
Second, the eagle is MUCH sharper than any part of the branch he is landing on. I'm guessing you used selective sharpening on the eagle, which certainly is a standard approach, but in this case, for me, it creates a distracting or at least less-than-perfect result. I find myself wanting the gorgeous weathered features of the dead branch to share the exquisite sharpness of the eagle...which you have somehow managed to nearly achieve from wingtip to wingtip making the lack of sharpness on the branch even more perplexing. I know our eyes are drawn to sharpness and having the subject the sharpest part of the image is good fundamentals, but I really think this will be stronger if you run similar sharpening on the branch. (Note that this "issue" is much more noticeable on the smaller image.)
I still can't get over the great look you captured here. Excellent timing and strong graphical feel.
I do see what you mean, showing more of the branches enhances the posture of him landing..Thanks!!