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Life Force
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Life Force

by John Clulow

Gallery: POP PhotosPosted March 14, 2013151 views14 comments
I'm going to put this here because it doesn't fit excactly elsewhere. In our second class, the teacher illustrated use of HDR in creating impressions of flowers. Focus stacking is another way impressions can be created; not literally photographs.

This would qualify under the "close-up" criterion here, and, perhaps, under the "artistic" criterion, and maybe under "flora" where if it grows, it goes ; but maybe not.

So anyway, this is a composite of several shots of a lily (I think) on a light box the teacher provided. I wanted it to indicate the light coming from within the flower as a sort of metaphor for the "life force", or as Paul Tillich called it in his existential theology, "The Courage to Be".

I realize there are issues with sharpness of focus, but, in context, one doesn't have time to optimize everything, and I am more interested in the light here than the sharpness. Let's start from that premise and any additional ideas would be very much appreciated.

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on March 15, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Very nice work, John. The concept and light are great, John, and the detail/sharpness looks pretty good to me. It's an eye catching result that I'd be happy with. My only reservation is that this particular variety of lily has a lots of random "specks" which are pronounced because of the backlighting, making the flower look, well, sort of dirty, if you know what I mean. I tend to prefer perfection in set up portrait images like this, but that's subjective.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on March 15, 2013 at 6:23 PM
Thanks for your comments, scott lanz. I do see and agree with what you are saying about the "dirty aspect"; the less than perfect presentation. And I agree with that point of view totally within the context you are thinking of.

Perhaps images like this seem to suggest a particular context to you. But what if we were to think outside that box? Life isn't always clean and perfectly presented, right? So looking at this image in that way, from an existential, individual perspective, as in Japanese art where imperfections are not only accepted but admired, how would you feel about that idea?

Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on March 17, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Creative title John, I like this.
Cool back-lit type of look that carries your theme of 'Life Force' well, with this 'inner' glow from the 'heart' of the flower..
And I agree - "Life isn't always clean and perfectly presented".. Existentially speaking of course:smile:
I might suggest removing the sensor spots in your BG to improve it.
Well done:wavey:
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments
Comment posted by Danny on March 17, 2013 at 9:02 PM
You could even move the light between stacks for a different effect again if you want to stack, but this is a different exercise. Looks darn good though with that lighting going on and nice details and colours. Its almost like its a light itself the way its lit. In that you succeeded really well.

All the best John.

Danny.
Registered on November 25, 2003, 165 Posts, 1345 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on March 18, 2013 at 10:45 AM
I like this a lot, John. I might want a bit more room on top, but a really minor nit. The lighting is excellent, as are the backlit colors.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on March 18, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Thanks for looking and commenting Howard, Danny, and Harley. Your comments and Scott's make me feel like experimenting more with new ideas such as my teacher proposed in our last class.
Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Kent Staubus on March 20, 2013 at 12:31 AM
The back lighting gives it the appearance of stained glass.


Kent in SD
Registered on November 11, 2003, 121 Posts, 2098 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on March 22, 2013 at 12:45 AM
You achieved the inner glow from the lighting so well. What a gorgeous portrait. Congratulations on the award for this.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on March 23, 2013 at 9:44 AM
Thanks so much for your comments, Kent and Catherine.

But, Catherine, I have to say that there was no award :( <boo hoo>.... In the final critique class this past Wednesday, I got dinged for not having the anthers in sharp focus; "an absolute requirement" according to the teacher. (I had to chuckle to myself inside) But he was right. On the other hand, sometimes circumstances are such that we do the best we can under them. We go with the flow. Nothing's perfekt. :) :argue: :smile: :toast: :jump:
Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on March 24, 2013 at 2:43 PM
John: Congrats on the WP and thanks for giving me a way to extend the usefulness and life of my light table. Really nice work.>=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Kirk Greene on March 27, 2013 at 4:55 PM
I love that the primary subject here is the light, complimented by flower. After all, all we do as photographers is control and capture light. Usually we have this concept switched trying to get the light to compliment our subject. As you stated, we are usually too worried about making everything perfect rather than celebrating life's imperfections. By the way, your artist statement is great! I need to "get in" more. :toast:
Registered on May 12, 2004, 191 Posts, 1578 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on March 27, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Thanks again, Bill, and thanks for your insight, Kirk. You should check out John Muir. Without him, we would not have Sequoia or Yosemite. He went to school in Madison, WI, near where I live, and although I'm just starting to discover the natural world, I'm using him as a guide. You can find lots of information about him on the web.

We can all use more going in and going out is one way.
Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Kirk Greene on March 28, 2013 at 11:38 PM
John this may just inspire me to go back and study his impact more. I'm aware of his contribution to the NPS, I've hiked in Muir Woods, and sat on a bench with an amazing view below Yosemite Falls where his cabin sat. I'm certain I will be fascinated by the rest of the story.
Registered on May 12, 2004, 191 Posts, 1578 Comments
Comment posted by Elizabeth Arellano on April 5, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Gorgeous
Registered on February 18, 2008, 35 Posts, 302 Comments