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Last Years Oak Leaf
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Last Years Oak Leaf

by Charlie Baugh

Gallery: FloraPosted April 30, 201387 views10 comments
You can help me by critically commenting on anything you feel could be better done BUT especially brightness. Eye sight not what is was and during processing on this, since it is overall quite dark, I was and am unsure what normal eyesight sees in this image.

Olympus E-5
12-60mm @ 60mm FL
1/80 sec (tripod)
F8 -2.0ev
ISO 800 (a goof)

Large view provided.

Comments

10 comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on April 30, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Charlie: I think you did great! The light looks good to me and I like your subject. What is the base? >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Charlie Baugh on April 30, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Thanks Bill. This is sitting on a table covered with a flimsy brown cloth of what material, I don't know. It is the same material that I use as almost all my backdrops.. Good to know I still have the brightness about right.
Registered on April 18, 2011, 329 Posts, 1985 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on April 30, 2013 at 11:15 PM
Utterly gorgeous, Charlie. Now that I've said that, I like the lighting a lot. Overall brightness works very well, I think, and the strong directionality is perfect for the subject. If you had another light source, I might be tempted to bring out the far right side of the leaf, but I'm not at all sure it would add anything-just something I might try. Brilliant conception and execution.

:toast:
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Jones on April 30, 2013 at 11:19 PM
Charlie, your eyes seem to be working very well, as is your imagination! This has such graceful lines, the old leaf almost looks alive.

Technically, you can look at this very closely, and see some "blown" highlights, but I always say that bright reflections are supposed to look that way. Dimming them would take the sparkle out of the image and make it less realistic, too. The dark parts look like they are in deep shadow, as they should be in this light. MUCH better than trying to brighten up shadows with an HDR-ish look.
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments
Comment posted by Charlie Baugh on May 1, 2013 at 12:14 AM
Your responses are really appreciated each of you. I did just a slight levels adjustment and so glad for your comment, Wayne, that you think the somewhat blown portions and very dark sections are to your taste as they were to mine. Often on images I post there are things that I expect critique and they are often a personal choice. Once I got used to the rather unique critique of NPN it became such a learning value that I thank this group for what I feel is the greatest expansion of my ability as an over 50 year hobby of photography.
Registered on April 18, 2011, 329 Posts, 1985 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on May 1, 2013 at 4:52 AM
Interesting shot Charlie, very nice light, you captured the subject beautifully.
John
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on May 1, 2013 at 5:01 AM
Charlie:

I think your lighting here is just spot on. The darkish image goes well with the mood of a leaf which have seen better light. Yet despite the darkish mood, there is lightness in the subject and it feels like it will be easily blown away with the slightess breeze. The leaf also looks fragile. Excellent subject choice, composition and execution. :toast:
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on May 1, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Superb image, Charlie ! I agree with Dennis that the light is just about perfect - maybe that touch more on the right side of the leaf he mentions would be even better. But the overall high contrast effect is stunning.
Registered on May 18, 2007, 1108 Posts, 7647 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on May 5, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Hi Charlie :wavey: Everyone agrees that the light in this image is delightful..... :jump: this is a very pleasing capture of an oak leaf :cool: :jump:
Albert Darmo
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on May 16, 2013 at 8:10 PM
I really like this Charlie, very good use of the side light to produce a dramatic image..
No easy task with a dead brown leaf :wink:
And the brightness is perfect for this style/type of image IMHO..
I might consider a different table cover, eliminating the obvious cloth texture/patterns there.
Well done :toast:
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments