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Serenity

by John Clulow

Gallery: POP PhotosPosted May 11, 2013100 views5 comments
In my composition class, focusing upon "power shapes", we were assigned a "zen word". We each drew a different secret word from a stack. Mine was "Serenity", as you might have guessed from the title.

We were to meditate on and try to become one with this word throughout the remainder of the class and take a picture that we thought would convey its meaning as we had internalized it. My mind generated many ideas, like throwing a stone into a calm pond and photographing the ripples; something I tried today in our outing at Cantigney Park, Batavia, IL. And setting up a shallow reflective pond in my little studio where I could capture ripples of a Buddha sculpture, etc. You get the idea.

Anyway, I started photographing a sort of gazebo building on the grounds at Cantigney Park, next to the pond, of which I may post pictures later. And I decided to go into it and sit down to rest. Once I got inside, I looked up and decided to move a table away so that I could lie down and shoot up (photos, that is) :smile: .

While I was lying there, trying to hold my head up against the view finder, I thought to just let my head lie back on the cold concrete slab.

Then I just let the camera rest on my face, and at that point I relaxed, sighed, and a wave of serentity-feeling washed over me; at least I think that's what it was. And I took the picture. While I hadn't thought of anything like this for my zen word, I decided, based upon the experiential context, I would use it for class.

Do you think this connotes "serenity" to you? Any other comments or suggestions? There is still time; the final class isn't until this Thursday.

Pentax K-5, Tamron 10-24mm at 10mm face-held, 1/125, ISO 560, f/4, crop of 4x5.

Comments

5 comments
Comment posted by Michael Cothran on May 11, 2013 at 9:58 PM
I really like this image also, but it does not convey serenity to me. It IS definitely a keeper, however. I'd like to see you work a little more on it - extract more detail from the wood to begin with, and then warm it up just a tad. Not sure if the vignetting is natural or added, but it looks fine. Excellent job on lining this up symmetrically.
Registered on December 5, 2012, 31 Posts, 730 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on May 12, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Hi Michael; thanks for commenting!

Since you did, I thought you might be interested in seeing the original "as shot" jpg from the raw file without any modifications. It's always difficult for me to find when to stop working on an image, but I may do more before I submit this one. Thanks so much for the suggestion.

And thanks also for telling me you don't get a sense of serenity from this image. We use words like "serenity" in much different contexts than we use words like "house" or "bird", and consequently we can expect less agreement among language users. In my own meditations on it, I found myself drawing a rather clear distinction between "serenity" and "tranquility". :smile: :wavey:
Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Cothran on May 12, 2013 at 9:48 AM
John - thanks for showing the original. That always helps immensely. I wish more posters would include an "original" so that we could see a before & after. It's really impressive to me to see how individuals process their images. But seeing what you began with, and what you end up with tells a much better story. I can clearly see now how much warmer the finished version is, and seeing that, I might back off on my suggestion to warm it more. I WOULD still try to extract more detail. Wood always has so much more to offer, in terms of detail, than meets the eye. I can also see where you cropped out the corners - a wise choice in my opinion. I'm very drawn to the image, as I love symmetrical designs, but I would be hard pressed to come up with a single adjective that describes its impact on me. And what you personally felt while lying on the hard floor may not easily transfer to the viewer, or to the image itself.
Registered on December 5, 2012, 31 Posts, 730 Comments
Comment posted by Bob&Charly Nelson on May 18, 2013 at 11:30 AM
I don't know about serenity John, but the composition is spot on in my opinion. Really well seen, captured and displayed.
Bob :wavey:
Registered on October 27, 2005, 289 Posts, 4202 Comments
Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on May 18, 2013 at 1:20 PM
This is great. :toast:
Registered on January 29, 2010, 285 Posts, 4281 Comments