Gallery: FloraPosted May 13, 201325 views3 comments
another version, same day daffodils.
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Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on May 13, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Daffodils are tough! I like this, but it could definitely use more structure of the in-focus blossom.
Registered on July 24, 2006, 2741 Posts, 12349 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on May 13, 2013 at 7:20 PM
I like the composition, Elisabeth. I do find myself wishing the main subject popped from the bg a little more.
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Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on May 14, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Looks like the color balance is a little off. Love the light on this bunch of daffodils, as it brings a nice glow to the flowers. I also like how the comp drifts away to the soft and colorful background. The subject daffodil is in great condition. Maybe sharpen that one, soften the partial yellow one below right (not soft enough, not sharp enough as is) and crop in from the right a little. Lots of potential here!
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
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