Tricolored Heron
by Jerry Marella
I like this type of photo, but I never know if it works. It's like a bird landscape and my landscape skills are far from good so I have a hard time judging these things. I know I like them when I see what others have done.
This was at Ft. Desoto this past winter sometime.
EOS 1D
400 2.8 w/1.4 extender
ISO 250
1/1600 @ f6.3
Thoughts, comments, and critiques are appreciated.
Thanks for looking
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9 commentsI think you may have an uncheck box for your colour profile (sRGB) as it shows untagged too????
TFS
Steve
I'll also check the profile. Thanks.
Cheers
Steve
I'm a stickler for level. (I always have a bubble level on my camera.) In this case, the wavelets are not an indicator of level. Their not being parallel to the edge of the frame simply means that you weren't perpendicular to them. If the bird had been moving, creating ripples, the axis of the ellipse of the ripples is a good indicator of level. Also the reflection can be an indicator of level. Assuming your lens was approximately level, a point on the reflection should be vertically aligned with the corresponding point on the bird's body. With a long lens, even if the lens is slightly tilted downwards, the angle is small, and the reflection test, especially near the center of the image, works well. In this case, the reflection is a little too diffuse to pick a precise point, and you cropped the head in the reflection so we can't see the eye or bill. I'll be the contrarian here and say that this image doesn't look unlevel to me.
Regarding reflections: for me, the reflection should be all or nothing. If the reflection is good enough to include, all of it should be included. Even if the reflection is incomplete, I think it's a good practice to include space in the frame for it. If the reflection isn't good enough to include, or if you cant get all of it, then less than half the reflection should be shown. This, of course, is not a hard and fast rule - just a rule of thumb peculiar to me. You should follow your own sense of aesthetics.
Thanks again. I appreciate the constructive critiques and your time.