Gallery: LandscapePosted May 27, 2013450 views10 comments
The sun sets over Lanai as the tides flow over the rocky shore of Maui near Kihei, Maui, Hawaii, USA
Taken with Canon 5DMKII and 16-35 f2.8L
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10 comments
Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on May 27, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Sweet light and spot. The comp really bugs me b/c my eye is taken hard left and out of frame. Big no no. Others might not feel as strongly but kills the shot for me personally. Processing/etc is spot on :)
aF
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Evan Olson on May 27, 2013 at 11:42 PM
I like the shot but I agree with Aaron, the rocks really lead my eye out of the frame. Nice job with the water and sky however.
Registered on November 17, 2012, 31 Posts, 70 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on May 28, 2013 at 12:39 AM
MIke, I like your general presentation on this one very much. The processing is well done too.
I can see the point about the rocks angling out of the frame and wonder if a square comp might work better, just thinking out loud here. It might just bring the focus back to dead center a little more with the FG rocks as well as get the POV to the distant island or landmass out there.
Regardless, this is right in your wheelhouse and your excellent style of photography for sea / beach-scapes. Another fine post.
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on May 28, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Great sky. Comp could be stronger as others have pointed out but I love the light you captured and the flow of water over rock
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Gary McGhee on May 28, 2013 at 2:12 PM
Nice wave action Mike and I like the light reflecting on the wet rocks. Nice sky too.
Gary.
Registered on April 15, 2010, 142 Posts, 2416 Comments
Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on May 28, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Beuaitufl light and location. I can see what Aaron means about the comp. It doesn't bother me that much here but I think maybe another angle would have worked better. Processing looks good.
Registered on January 29, 2010, 285 Posts, 4281 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on May 28, 2013 at 5:33 PM
So many things to like in this scene, Mike, although Aaron makes a good point about the line of the rocks. Love the light on the rocks and in the sunset and also the wave action into the rocks.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on May 28, 2013 at 8:27 PM
Beautiful, love all the detail in the rock. The water looks just right and I don't mind the water on the left because there is so much else to look at.
Registered on November 11, 2011, 404 Posts, 1639 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on May 29, 2013 at 11:18 PM
Great sky and wave action, Mike. I can see what others are saying about the rocks, but it doesn't bother me that much because of all the other beautiful elements in the image. I could also see this working with Paul's crop suggestion.
Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on June 2, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Mike: I really envy you this experience and the capture. Beautiful image.>=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
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10 commentsaF
I can see the point about the rocks angling out of the frame and wonder if a square comp might work better, just thinking out loud here. It might just bring the focus back to dead center a little more with the FG rocks as well as get the POV to the distant island or landmass out there.
Regardless, this is right in your wheelhouse and your excellent style of photography for sea / beach-scapes. Another fine post.
Gary.
Ed