Gallery: LandscapePosted June 24, 2013244 views3 comments
We had an extremely wet Spring here in Northeastern PA, here is a simple shot with the hopes of better weather to come... just not this hot already now!!! Larger posted too, your C&C welcomed.
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Comment posted by Ben Horne on June 24, 2013 at 6:46 PM
I've always been a fan of backlit trees and foreground elements, so I can definitely see what drew you to this scene. I think the sun is a bit too hot for the sun star though. I don't think it was hidden far enough behind the branch to give the ideal effect. If it was a bit more obscured by the branch, I think it would give you a better balance between having the sun star, but not blowing out the highlights so fast. Also, I would suggest darkening the mid tones and dark tones a bit. I feel the shadow recovery is a bit too much, and the dark tones lose some of the richness that gives the image a sense of mystery and depth.
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on June 24, 2013 at 7:46 PM
I can see what drew you to this scene too, and I know I would have been. The sun does look pretty hot and I think if you could have blocked it more with the tree branches it may have worked better, but still the image is pretty cool looking. I think Ben made some other suggestions that would work well on this too.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Maile on June 25, 2013 at 12:03 PM
Thank you Ben and Nick, very good feedback. I had others to choose from, and realized the sun is a bit bright and I could have done more to block it out better... but I was trying to strike that balance with some light on the FG.
Registered on March 2, 2009, 984 Posts, 2518 Comments
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Lone Rock, WI