Sand pistol
by Jared Warren
I haven't made a lot of abstract images, but made some attempts earlier this month in this canyon near Page, AZ. Does this one work for you? Any suggestions on comp, processing, etc., to take things up a notch?
5DIII, 24-105mm @ 40mm, f/14, 2.0 sec
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12 commentsThe shapes and lines are nice. I don’t know how to improve on this one.
Wow, what a difference time can make eh? Interesting too how our wives/spouses often have such different tastes and perspectives. Of course being the photog side, I'm biased against the soft and beautiful light present here in this wonderful sandstone abstract. Just enough light to create the contrasts and a little rim lighting up top. Excellent.
The only minor thing I'm torn about is the empty LLC. It's not a big deal, and perhaps not an issue for others. Oh, and there's a tiny specular highlight in the ULC corner that detracts a bit; again, minor, but you might clone that out if you're printing.
Just love the soft light and color here.
Lon
i wasn't going to say anything else, but since you specifically asked for it: i would probably try adding a bit more contrast to bring out the lines in the foreground (mainly the brightest/magenta part).
The second post with the harsher light doesn't work nearly as well for me.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI