Gallery: LandscapePosted September 11, 2013191 views2 comments
I shot this in July. These clouds wound up building into a pretty strong storm. This edit is from a print proof.
All comments welcome.
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Comment posted by Shane McDermott on September 11, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Hi Bradly
This vista looks like it has some real potential. However, for me this image doesn't really seem to lead me anywhere. The BG is not strong of present enough to pull my attention away for the dominance of the FG Rocks. If you can return, consider bringing the valley floor and BG cliffs more into prominence and look for FG lines leading the viewer through the scene.
I hope this helps?
Shane
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Comment posted by Dan Kearl on September 11, 2013 at 6:17 PM
I would like to see more sky and less FG rock, Just a preference.
The clouds are very nicely done.
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
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2 commentsThis vista looks like it has some real potential. However, for me this image doesn't really seem to lead me anywhere. The BG is not strong of present enough to pull my attention away for the dominance of the FG Rocks. If you can return, consider bringing the valley floor and BG cliffs more into prominence and look for FG lines leading the viewer through the scene.
I hope this helps?
Shane
The clouds are very nicely done.