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Snow Drift

by Brian Donovan

Gallery: Man & NaturePosted October 10, 2013209 views18 comments
I stumbled across this desolate scene somewhere in the backroads of Idaho last winter. I’ve always enjoyed shooting trees that are freshly iced over, and this one came with a bonus old fence! Does the speckled hillside in the back left bother anyone? I’m on the fence whether it is distracting or not.

5D Mark III
70-300 @ 300mm
1/500 sec @ f/9
ISO 400

Thanks for any comments and critique that you may have.

Comments

18 comments
Comment posted by Ken Smith on October 10, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Lovely! A terrific sense of uncluttered natural beauty. The fenceline is elegant in this. I would consider only less vignette in right corner. Wonderful photo.
Registered on September 5, 2008, 449 Posts, 2444 Comments
Comment posted by Thomas Haney on October 10, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Beautifully simple and moody photograph, I love it. You might try a slight crop on top and bottom for more of a panoramic feel, given the subject matter. Well done!
Registered on April 7, 2013, 138 Posts, 537 Comments
Comment posted by Lucy VanSwearingen on October 10, 2013 at 2:05 PM
Frankly, this is such a compelling shot, that I did not even notice the speckled hillside until you pointed it out. My eye, immediately, follows the fenceline to the tree. To me, the more fence, the better.

I do think, it would be interesting to see a pano crop, as suggested by Thomas.
Registered on May 23, 2009, 800 Posts, 2042 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Reed on October 10, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Brian, Great shot. Love the fence line. The speckled hill does take away from the clean feeling. Yet I feel if you hadn't asked It wouldn't bother me. :jump:
Registered on September 19, 2009, 198 Posts, 1074 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on October 10, 2013 at 4:20 PM
Ooh, I like this a lot Brian. Very graphic with wonderful tones.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on October 10, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Brian,

This fabulous! Great eye - a scene I think so many of use would love to photograph. (I don't live near snow, so I guess that's out...)
I too did not notice the bg speckles and don't think it's a distraction. I think it helps provide a little context and depth, so I think it's fine. I might agree with some crop option; mostly from the top because the gray sky isn't adding much, the story is about the tree and fence, lines, isolation, etc. I'm not sure I would crop up from the bottom and make at any tighter to the fence, unless you actually crop in to the fence. Lots of options, but his works beautifully as presented.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on October 10, 2013 at 9:25 PM
This is a great, minimalist view. Because of that, I would clone out that speckled hill and I work hard at keeping my cloning to a minimum. It might be worth looking at a version that crops some from the bottom and from the right to see how that feels. I think it would increase the sense of movement even more but can't be sure that it's an improvement with only my fingers and sliding the window around as tools. :biggrin:
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Olsen on October 11, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Beautiful and minimal...very well done!!
:toast:
Registered on October 19, 2006, 306 Posts, 1571 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on October 11, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Don't mention the speckled hillside and nobody will notice it :) Wonderful graphics and composition.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Donovan on October 11, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Thanks for all the great feedback. Here's a new cropped version of the shot. I like it better and it definitely puts the emphasis on the tree and fence line.
Registered on August 29, 2013, 11 Posts, 40 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on October 11, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Excellent!!! Wonderful minimalism. The second version looks more cloned that cropped, but why split hairs? :biggrin: I like this a lot.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by John Mumaw on October 11, 2013 at 7:09 PM
The second version nails it! What a lovely scene you captured. I like this image a lot!
Having said that, you might consider using Levels to brighten it up just a hair. Moving the right slider in to the left just a bit to meet the first bits of data makes this sing, IMO.
Nevertheless, you did a fantastic job here!
Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on October 11, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Love your repost Brian. The minimalistic scene and B&W work well here.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Carolyn Derstine on October 11, 2013 at 8:44 PM
I love the simpleness of this photo, Brian! The curving fence makes a great leading line up to the frosted trees. Your repost is excellent. :smile:
Registered on February 16, 2011, 610 Posts, 3684 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Donovan on October 12, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Much appreciated feedback! I am much happier with this image with these recommended edits. Here is the shot with a slight levels adjustments to adjust the white point.
Registered on August 29, 2013, 11 Posts, 40 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on October 13, 2013 at 2:51 PM
A great shot here, Brian. I love this comp and the wonderful feel. Your repost really does the job for me! :toast:

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Cameron on October 20, 2013 at 11:35 AM
Cool and very beautiful I have one or two of these fence lines going to single trees in the snow and they have a lovely stark simplicity too them that works with all manner of crops. I like a square crop in this scene very much from the gap in the fence to the right edge. It centralises the tree but that is not much of an issue for a square crop.
Registered on August 6, 2004, 1125 Posts, 3318 Comments
Comment posted by Ingrid Vekemans on November 22, 2013 at 8:14 AM
The repost is a much better version of an already powerful shot. :toast:
Grt, Ingrid.
Registered on August 2, 2010, 138 Posts, 780 Comments