Black & Gold
by Kane Engelbert
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A different kind of ice photo from Dream Lake, Colorado. This is a zoom image of rippled ice with golden morning light reflecting off the surrounding mountains. A light dusting of powder snow has settled into the cups of rippled ice. The ice is almost bubble free in this scene which allows for a deep, dark and mysterious feel.
Comments and Critique welcome
Comments
30 commentsI'm going to dissent here, largely because I know you and in the past you've asked me to be harsh. I think this is a terrific subject and the contrast of the black, white, and yellow is a great start. I'm just left wishing for a better design or composition. On top of that, I'm not seeing too much three-dimensionality; the image seems a little flat (not in the sense of contrast and "pop", but in the sense of lack of depth). I'm seeing mostly horizontal lines in the current composition. I'd love to see some lines (or even better, curves) leading into the frame. I don't know if that's possible with the physical setup of the amphitheater around Dream Lake. I'm guessing that this was a sunrise shot; if you returned at another time of day, could you get the right shadows and reflections to have the ice waves oriented differently?
It is a very cool photograph. I don't think it quite lives up to some of your others.
Cheers,
Mark.
Looking at this holistically, I think that it's a very successful abstract image. As Mark stated, 'It is a very cool photograph.' and I certainly agree with that observation. Well seen, captured and 'developed', Kane!
Post processing these ice shots are not very challenging but composing ice I find very difficult. As many on this forum know, just shooting random "neat" ice features won't take you far. Its actually getting some ice lines to make sense to the eye.
This interesting patch of ice existed last winter only in my four seasons of frequenting the lake in January. It wasn't much of a scene, I remember it being the size of maybe a breakfast table. The combo of semi bubble-less ice (black,) horizontal lines and pockets of snow stood out among a sea of other kinds of less photogenic ice. When the morning light hit, I basically new I had to make the comp work somehow.
What really makes this ice special to my eye is the slightly textured surface sheen present throughout the scene. This textured surface made for a metallic look with the rich morning light. Dream is famous for its polished ice, meaning you spend most of your time shooting fractures and bubbles under the surface. This morning I showed up and the ice had a weird textured surface sheen throughout the lake. I was pretty pissed off when I first noticed this phenomenon, because that surface sheen makes it difficult to shoot features under the ice. My day would be spent rubbing that sheen off with a towel. But this one, I used it to make that metallic look. I suppose that's what I'm most proud of with this one; I made something beautiful that day in less than ideal conditions.
Bob
Tim!