Gallery: FloraPosted February 3, 201450 views6 comments
I thought the waterfall in the BG was pleasing. This might be too busy. All comments and critique sought
D7000, f36, ISO 100, 230mm, tripod, shutter release.
Thanks for looking
Bob
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Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on February 3, 2014 at 9:15 AM
I like the drama that the waterfall bg brings, Bob, though I hadn't realised that was what it was ! I don't feel it's too busy at all but would like to have seen a vertical comp perhaps, or at least more of the stems to make the setting a bit clearer. Love the light on the flowers !
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Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on February 3, 2014 at 12:42 PM
The Stokes Aster is very vibrant, but the BG as seen is too distracting. I think , from the f/36, you were trying to include the waterfall with some detail. It just wasn't going to happen at 230mm. You could try to rescue this by cropping from the right and top to remove a good bit of the white, then burning the rest of the white highlights, but you would have been far better off to find a less distracting BG.
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on February 3, 2014 at 3:26 PM
The waterfall gives a nice context to the flowers. Beauty.
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Comment posted by gary phillips on February 4, 2014 at 10:43 PM
I agree with Ian here. Including more of stems in a vertical comp would have been nice. The waterfall does not bother me but the gold on the rock midframe right keeps grabbing my eye.. Super light on the flowers.
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Comment posted by Giuseppe Guadagno on February 5, 2014 at 4:35 AM
I think that the background is beautiful, original, emotive, with mouvement and depth. I have no critique only a personal preference: in a dramatic image I would like better a real strong blue, without magenta contaminations. Beautiful photo, Robert.
Take care.
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Comment posted by Bill Fach on February 8, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Bob: Neat BG indeed and really nice lighting on the flowers. Nice find and a fine capture. >=))>
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