Gallery: AvianPosted May 4, 2014479 views8 comments
Taken in late evening sun Merritt Island Florida.
Canon 7D
ISO 320
1/4000
EF 300 f 2.8 with 1.4 at 420 mm
f 4.0
60 % frame
Comments and critique appreciated. Thanks for looking
Comments
8 comments
Comment posted by Randy Runtsch on May 4, 2014 at 1:15 PM
Bill, this is a well-captured image. The details on the feathers are nice and crisp.
There seems to be almost a vignette effect, so brightening the corners to match the rest of the water may draw more attention to the subject.
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Comment posted by Bill Kellermeyer on May 4, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Is this better ?
Registered on March 19, 2013, 52 Posts, 161 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on May 4, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Very cool pose, really like this Bill.
Great light and detail, nice framing.
I think the re-post's a good improvement, well done!
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Comment posted by Dennis Plank on May 4, 2014 at 6:01 PM
Cool wingspread, Bill. I think the composition would work a bit better if the bird were in the upper right portion of the frame, so it had more room to land.
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Comment posted by Jefferson Silva on May 4, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Great image. I liked the wings wide open.
The re-post is better, IMO
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Comment posted by Gary Gulash on May 5, 2014 at 1:42 AM
Glorious pose, really shows off the wonderful wingspan. Repost looks a little cleaner.
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Comment posted by Rick Cloran on May 5, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Love the wing position and the water droplets coming off the feet. The water is over saturated for my tastes.
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Comment posted by Kurt Bowman on May 5, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Great pose and nice details. I agree with repost is an improvement.
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8 commentsThere seems to be almost a vignette effect, so brightening the corners to match the rest of the water may draw more attention to the subject.
Great light and detail, nice framing.
I think the re-post's a good improvement, well done!
The re-post is better, IMO