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Lily+repost

by Bob/Charly Nelson

Gallery: FloraPosted May 15, 201444 views10 comments
Another from Mothers Day
F32, 10 sec, iso 100, tripod, shutter release
Comments and suggestions always sought.
Bob :wavey:

Comments

10 comments
Comment posted by Nathan Buck on May 15, 2014 at 9:31 PM
A nice composition Robert. Nice details on the stamen (pistils - whatever :smile:). I think a tad more room at the top would help, and the light is quite dull - I think you could adjust the RAW file some to pull some more light out of the flower and it would help.

Nathan
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1101 Posts, 13589 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on May 15, 2014 at 11:20 PM
Bob - Beautiful shot with great DOF. Centering is an option here and a touch more space at the top might be great as well. Like Nathan said, you can work the RAW file to improve the slightly dark feel to this.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on May 15, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Overall I agree with Nathan's comments Robert.
I like the details at the anthers, and the stigma at center's well seen.
I might suggest pulling up the mid-tones using curves at the center line to improve this.
It would + the overall brightness & contrast.
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on May 16, 2014 at 1:18 AM
Superb job of getting the pistil and stamens all in the same focal plane, Bob. Maybe a touch more room on the top?

:toast:
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Ken Smith on May 16, 2014 at 2:03 AM
Hi Robert, nice shot of the pistols and stamen. The pollen detail is superb. Agree with the notion already mentioned to lighten it up…and add room at top. Well done.
Registered on September 5, 2008, 449 Posts, 2444 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on May 16, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Love the composition, Bob, though I agree about just a touch more room at the top and a brighter look. Great clarity in the stigma and anthers.
Registered on May 18, 2007, 1108 Posts, 7647 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on May 16, 2014 at 7:31 PM
Strong composition Robert. I agree with the others about brightening this a bit and adding a little space at the top.

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Bob/Charly Nelson on May 17, 2014 at 6:53 AM
did I go too far?
Registered on January 29, 2014, 35 Posts, 398 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on May 17, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Hi Robert :wavey: I think the lighting on a image depends on the many conditions, was the subject originally darkish. or lightish. do you want to keep the light as it was. or change the light to something it never was? to for better or worse ... . and remember most viewers like it brighter than darker . so dont shoot in too low light, which seems to be my problem sometimes.. :smile: here i agree with Nathan , Here the light is a bit dull.. and the image needs room on the top. the detail and composition are very good... keep up the good work..


Albert Darmo

Canada.
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Miro Susta on May 18, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Beautiful flower macro, excellent stamen details, beautiful colors. Well done.
Registered on August 18, 2006, 719 Posts, 3736 Comments