Doppelgänger
by Richard Sandor
While not a true double or alter ego, the mockingbird in the background added interest in what was otherwise empty space. A small, heavily shaded pond near McAllen, Texas was where this was taken.
Shot with a D4 and 500 mm lens, 1/2000, f/5.6, Auto ISO at 320 and -2/3ev. C&C most welcome. Richard
Comments
13 commentsThe subject bird is well exposed, tack sharp with a sweet environment and nice pose. The BG bird appears very unnatural and has a presence that competes with the subject bird in a negative way. I like this composition but will have to agree with Phil that the empty space would be better.
My first thoughts were too bright and too OOF. The subject bird appears to be looking at the BG bird with concern which does add interest and makes this a hard choice. The BG bird feels more like a statue than a real bird as presented and that's the main thing that doesn't work IMO.
I do think it looks better without it.....
Richard: Really nothing special. The uniform black area made it relatively easy to clone out the OOF bird. Just work in smaller areas to build up more black, then bigger clone stamp brushes to make it smoother as space permits. As I said, I didn't take much time and didn't work the boundary between the black background and the transition to the mid ground.
The OP is certainly very different I am unsure whether it works or not.
The RP looks much better