Bird on a Stick

Gallery: AvianPosted April 2, 2015108 views6 comments

Another Great Egret from the Dallas rookery dutifully bringing nest material to his mate. I liked the nice view of the wings, the trailing feathers and, of course, the stick in the beak. (smile)

Processed using Lightroom 5 and Photoshop CC2014. Comments and critiques welcome.

Canon 7D Mark II
Canon 200-400 f4 L IS
f7.1
1/3200s
ISO 320
Focal Length 400mm

Comments

6 comments

Comment posted by Ken Watkins on April 3, 2015 at 5:17 AM

Jerry,
Excellent pose and detail, I might tone down the sky a little

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Comment posted by Mark Seaver on April 3, 2015 at 11:09 AM

The whites are spectacular, Jerry. I also agree that the pose and the stick are great additions.

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Comment posted by Scott Frye on April 3, 2015 at 12:55 PM

Great whites and fine behavior shot

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Comment posted by Dennis Plank on April 3, 2015 at 6:53 PM

Or "stick on a bird". Nice job, Jerry. Beautiful wingspread and nice behavior. You might want to try bringing out a bit more detail in the head and neck area.

Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments

Comment posted by John Launstein on April 4, 2015 at 4:27 AM

Gorgeous, Jerry! I'm not going to argue with any of the suggestions above, but there's surely isn't much room for improvement here. Solid all-round. Sky has a slight purple-ish tone to me, but I'm still getting used to a new monitor so don't take my word for it!

Registered on April 5, 2011, 223 Posts, 1193 Comments

Comment posted by Stephen Kaluski on April 4, 2015 at 5:13 AM

Hi Jerry, the nice rich blue gives a good punch to the image and provides standout, but agree with John about tweaking the colour to a more 'cleaner' blue. I think if you had a bit more space below and a fraction less above then the 'weight' of the image will be better balanced.

TFS
Steve

Registered on March 25, 2007, 189 Posts, 1064 Comments