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Gallery: LandscapePosted November 30, 20153,423 views9 comments
Taken today at about 4 oclock the sun was setting on the newly formed ice. i like the w. turner like color reflections... comments
D600- 16-35- f/4 & 35mm.. f/20. 1/10 sec. iso 200 .. tripod- cable release - mirror up.
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9 comments
Comment posted by Alberto Patiño on November 30, 2015 at 11:16 PM
I agree, you have some very beautiful light reflecting on the ice!
Registered on December 2, 2014, 278 Posts, 1736 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Jirka on December 1, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Albert,
The colors in the ice are very pleasing. I don't know if you did it on purpose, but the tree at the top center points back down at the ice and makes my eye flow back into the image. well done.
Jim
Registered on November 1, 2003, 254 Posts, 1620 Comments
Comment posted by David Schoen on December 1, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Nice ice.
Registered on November 6, 2006, 1213 Posts, 4587 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 1, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Albert,
Wonderful reflection with the ice creating some gentle abstracts and detail. Speaking of detail, does this appear a little soft to anyone? Color and processing looks spot on to me. The only suggestion I have is to remove/clone that tiny bit of shore in the URC. Also, while not really a distraction, I might do the same and try to avoid the bit of shore? in the LRC. Cropping of course is always subjective, but for sure I would crop/clone the URC.
Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on December 1, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Albert, I agree the small part in the urc is a bit of a distraction. Other than that this is really nice. I like the reflected colors very much and you also have some very nice texturs. Good work!
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on December 1, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Real nice reflections with the warm and cool tones. I like Lon's suggestions about the shore. Either crop or clone?
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on December 1, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Here is the cloned version, i think a crop on top would have weakened the composition
comments appreciated
Albert Darmo
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on December 2, 2015 at 12:19 AM
This is a fine image, Albert. I like it very much the repost fixed the minor problem you had. It's not really sharp, especially further back, but this is not an image where sharpness is a major deal. BTW the smaller version looks noticeably better than the large due to the presence of a frame.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 2, 2015 at 1:50 AM
Albert,
Excellent job with the rework. IMHO, you've nailed it. thanks for taking the time.
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
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9 commentsThe colors in the ice are very pleasing. I don't know if you did it on purpose, but the tree at the top center points back down at the ice and makes my eye flow back into the image. well done.
Jim
Wonderful reflection with the ice creating some gentle abstracts and detail. Speaking of detail, does this appear a little soft to anyone? Color and processing looks spot on to me. The only suggestion I have is to remove/clone that tiny bit of shore in the URC. Also, while not really a distraction, I might do the same and try to avoid the bit of shore? in the LRC. Cropping of course is always subjective, but for sure I would crop/clone the URC.
Lon
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
comments appreciated
Albert Darmo
Excellent job with the rework. IMHO, you've nailed it. thanks for taking the time.