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Power of One

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 7, 2017361 views14 comments
Thank you so much for your comments and reaction to my previous post.  Guess I'm squeezing all I can out of that old rock wall. ;-)

And now getting carried away with titles...  But I did want to put in a plug for the biggest rock in the world.  My buddy Mr. Preston will always say, that's one big frickin rock - or BFR.  Not only does it provide countless photo ops by itself as the subject, but it also remains on of the greatest light sources in the valley.  Reflected light and direct reflections of light and color make for endless possibilities.

I was down by the Merced with my friend Kyle when we spied this reflection, the grasses and scattering of leaves.  This is actually the very same location Preston and I captured some images of ice a year ago. 

I've had a real difficult time with this one in processing.  Your feedback will be helpful.  For starters I should mention I did some sloppy content-aware cloning to remove an oof skinny branch hanging over the scene. What a pain.  But also curious thoughts on color, saturation and processing in general.

Thanks!

Lon

 

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on January 7, 2017 at 4:36 PM
The colors are excellent, Lon, particularly the greens. The processing is spot on as well. A couple of thoughts:

1. It would be nice if the pale grass strands that run across the rock reflection stood out a bit more. I think that's their purpose in a way.I'm not sure how I would do that.

2. As much as I like the green grass below with the yellow leaf a crop of the bottom that remove just above the leaf gives a lighter more graceful feeling to the image. It would be a more unconventional panoramic format, but what the hell. I like that top half more anyway.

These are just alternatives. It's excellent as is with the large bottom leaf being the point of focus.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on January 7, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Lon, the grasses and the reflection make for a most interesting dynamic balance to me. I also enjoy the sense of a gentle flow a lot. The scattered yellow leaves as focal points lead me nicely through the composition.

There are some tiny brighter grasses cutting the borders at the top and both sides - maybe a slight vignetting would make them less prominent.

Nevertheless this is an outstanding image for me, a beautiful capture of e fleeting moment.

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on January 7, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Very nicely seen and imaged, Lon. Excellent combination of colors, and the grass adds nice form to go with the great reflection. Finally, the yellow aspen leaf in the LRC is perfectly placed. The color of the rock makes this look more like Zion than Yosemite, but this is certainly a fine intimate landscape to complement your Yosemite images.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 7, 2017 at 7:13 PM

 The color of the rock makes this look more like Zion than Yosemite, 


Scott, you've nailed what is bothering me about this image.  While this color can happen on El Cap, it's a rare event under special conditions.  But my recollection is that El Cap in this situation wasn't this red.  I think I need to go back to the drawing board on this.

Thanks for the comments so far folks. Appreciate it.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Cameron on January 8, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Really nice shot I particularly like the upper two thirds, so much in fact that I might be tempted a crop to that.
Registered on August 6, 2004, 1125 Posts, 3318 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on January 8, 2017 at 1:40 PM
Very nice as usual, Lon.  Love the reflected detail of the rock wall.  I'm with Scott, I thought this could be Zion at first glance.  For some reason I see a square crop of the right side, but I can see why you went for the comp you did. Everything fits into place very well.  I hope you keep squeezing more of these images out for us to contemplate.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on January 8, 2017 at 7:05 PM
I really enjoy the way you see images in places that I probably would not even look at. I like the composition and the hint of place by the reflection of the rock wall in the image. 
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Mattia Oliviero on January 9, 2017 at 5:23 AM
You did a wonderful job with processing, Lon. I like especially the grass beneath and above the water, the effect is really eye-catching. I would not change a thing. 

Mattia
Registered on August 24, 2016, 43 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on January 9, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Excellent intimate image (almost an abstract). Great shapes and colors. No suggestions here. Beauty.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Ryan Shain on January 9, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Hi Lon,

I very much like this image as presented, and all the elements have harmoniously come together to create this beautify crafted intimate image. I really like the color combination of oranges and greens, and yeah it feels a bit like Zion, but it looks great as presented. I wanted to add that this image has such a nice delicate beauty about it too Lon.

Now that I have studied this image a bit more, maybe  a slight crop off from the bottom to right below that aspen leaf, yes I may like that in deed. 

Beautiful image Lon
Registered on February 20, 2007, 226 Posts, 4571 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on January 9, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Gorgeous mix of colors and a really fine composition, Lon. As mentioned previously this intimate scene has an almost abstract quality. Processing looks great. Not sure I can offer any suggestions.
Registered on December 10, 2015, 104 Posts, 1112 Comments
Comment posted by Prashant Khapane on January 11, 2017 at 3:11 PM
LOVE IT.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 492 Posts, 4580 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on January 11, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Incredible, delicate image, Lon.  An intimate image of Yosemite that also celebrates the grandeur of this amazing valley; all in one image.  Love everything about this.  Masterful photography in my opinion.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on January 11, 2017 at 11:21 PM
Lon: Jaw drfrownpping gorgeous. What a terrific find and superb capture.>=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments